Comment from danpald

Excellent

Poem filled with pride
For the love inside
That flows from the care
Of a grannie who is Nannie

Often the same
Words too short to fame
Of the review
More words to chew

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Ha Ha Dan you always make me smile with you great rhyming reviews and I look forward to getting them from you. so Thanks very much for your kind support

Thank you so much Dan
From this grateful Gran
Glad you stopped a while
Your words make me smile

Cheers Christine

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Cute rhymes nannie grannie. Love way
poet tells short sweet
story how grandchildren
love her. Very loving caring. Check mine put also. liberty justice

 Comment Written 14-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi Liberty Justice, Thanks for your review and yes I will check your out also. Catching up after a weekend away. Had fun with the pun from a naani to nannie LOL Cheers Christine

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Christine. Crikey! I thought I'd come on and read some of your work while I had five minutes to spare. It turns out that you've written one of the shortest story poems of all time lol. Very nicely done and I just noticed a "Naani" contest. I hope you have entered it, this would have gone close to taking it.

Catchya soon.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi Fez, G'day back yes I hope it went into this contest I assume it did. ha ha. Still having trouble sometimes, especially when the contest is 'blind' or not never sure if I should sign my name, LOL I have been very busy sine joining this site and have had some great success and meeting all the great people here. Glad you are back. SeeYa Cheers Chris

Comment from jonathan1

Excellent

This is a tidy short piece of work. Not too much to review lol. It rhymes, reads well and is a clever short piece. Have a great day

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi Jonathan. Thanks for you review and no a bit short, bit that is what a naani is LOL This nannie is reasonably tall Ha ha. You too have a great day Cheers Christine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

You are lucky to have so many beautiful grand daughters. I only have a boy and a girl and not much hope for more grand kids very soon.

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Hi Sandra, Thanks so much for your review and yes they are beautiful , but have removed the image as it was not aupposed to havecart work. Hope the Naani will stand alone Cheers

Comment from ciliverde

Excellent

Well, for one thing, you don't look old enough to have four granddaughters! That's a really cute photo! Also, I'm not sure what a Nanni poem is. Clearly you are blessed with a bevvy of sweethearts :)
Carol

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Hi Carol Thanks for your review and comments. I try to keep young these children help a lot LOL I,ve taken the photo off as it was not to have artwork, so this Nannie will stand alone Ha Ha Cheers

reply by ciliverde on 13-May-2016

Aww, that's too bad to lose the photo! Glad I saw it :)

Comment from gene roush

Good

This is very sweet.
Who knew just how fun this having grandchildren could be.
I'm Papa to eight boys and a little girl(She's the toughest of the bunch).
Thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Hi gene roush Thank for your review and lovely comments . Yes only 4 girls at the moment hoping for some more one day. Many Cheers to you

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes Christine, they are certainly a gorgeous quintet, and undoubtedly inherited their good looks from you! Ah genetics, it works every time, I have 3 blond, blue eyed grandsons, and that's were the resemblance ends, character traits quite unique to themselves, but they came from the same same Union, yet they are close, go figure? Yours too? Well done, great poetic offering, blessings, Roy,

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 13-May-2016

Hi Roy Yes they areca gorgeous quintet and thanks for your lovely compliment . but all quite different ,although my eldest grandaughter is writing poety too Yeeees . i had to take the photo off as this Naani has no artwork still I am glad you saw them so this Nannie must stand alone LOL. Cheers Christine

reply by royowen on 13-May-2016

Well done, it's all your fault they're gorgeous, heh heh

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Chrissy710, Sooooo beautiful - all your girls. You are very lucky to have a family filled with lots of girls. They always come home :-) I loved your poem for the love and tenderness it offered the reader. Big hugs all around ~DD

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi PoemsofDD. So many thanks for your great review and I am glad you could see the message through the pun. LOL Yes they are gorgeous, but had to take the image off as it was not supposed to have artwork. next time ha ha. Cheers and hugs back Christine

Comment from Susanne M. Psyris

Excellent

Very lovely picture to accompany your written words here. Enjoyed sharing in an insightful "Kodak" moment in your life. God bless and hugs to you and yours, Susanne

 Comment Written 13-May-2016

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reply by the author on 15-May-2016

Hi Susanne. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my naani. and they are cute, but I took the image off as it was not supposed to have artwork still there will always be a next time to show them off. Cheers and hugs back Christine

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 15-May-2016

Sorry that I missed that requirement (I certainly would have informed you!). Glad you picked up on it and removed it for the contest...God bless and hugs, Susanne

reply by the author on 15-May-2016

thank Susanne, but I am not sure if it is the contest now it seemed to have had a mix up with where it went. so waiting to hear from Tom Cheers anyway

reply by Susanne M. Psyris on 15-May-2016

Tom is always pretty quick to fix that! I know because I have done that a couple of times myself!!! lol...God bless and hugs, Susanne