Life's Observations and Reflections
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Don't Cry My Dear"This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
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Comment from Marykelly
This is a very sad but realistic poem about the end of a life that will bring an end to a 50 year relationship. The speaker is ready to give up this life with its pain and suffering and ironically the patient is the one offering comfort.
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This is a very sad but realistic poem about the end of a life that will bring an end to a 50 year relationship. The speaker is ready to give up this life with its pain and suffering and ironically the patient is the one offering comfort.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much Mary for your kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from pmait
Well said. I have seen this many times as a pastor. I once had a Moslem psychiatrist say to me that devoted Christians die differently than others. Looking forward I hope I die well, whether I am in pain or not. I am determined to experience my dying fully, as I have sought to live my life fully.
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Well said. I have seen this many times as a pastor. I once had a Moslem psychiatrist say to me that devoted Christians die differently than others. Looking forward I hope I die well, whether I am in pain or not. I am determined to experience my dying fully, as I have sought to live my life fully.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from Douglas Paul
It does sound like you had an interesting discussion with your friends. Your poem captures a peaceful feeling of the person near death. That would be a good way to go. This is a thought-provoking poem, Marijke
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It does sound like you had an interesting discussion with your friends. Your poem captures a peaceful feeling of the person near death. That would be a good way to go. This is a thought-provoking poem, Marijke
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous review, Douglas. I appreciate the kind comments. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
Comment from jusylee72
Lovely representation of love and life. It is still so to say goodbye to those we love even when they are ready. Sometimes we think we are ready but when it happens we miss them so much. Beautifully written.
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Lovely representation of love and life. It is still so to say goodbye to those we love even when they are ready. Sometimes we think we are ready but when it happens we miss them so much. Beautifully written.
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much jucylee, for your kind and generous review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)