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This is my prologue for the NaPoWriMo 2016 (30 Poe
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tfawcus
Sounds pretty good to me! Though personally I'd prefer red wine or port with my cheese. Champagne bubbles get up my nose and make me sneeze - an absolute disaster when one's mouth is full of cheese!
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Comment Written 07-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016
Hi tfawcus, I started with the red wine (my preference) but when I get together with some of my friends, they prefer champagne - especially when the cork pops! red wine / champagne / white wine - all 2 syllables, but the champagne won out today! Thanks for your kind review. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)
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