Comment from Connie C

Exceptional

What a great entry for this contest, Debra! Your words and the pictures you chose work perfectly to meet the requirements for this type of poem. I hope you do well in the contest.
Hugs,
Connie

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi Connie :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, good luck wishes and very generous 6 star award! I'm chuffed! Thank you again :) Love, Debra x

Comment from MelB

Excellent

This is a powerful poem about two people growing apart and forgetting what they had together. The artwork goes well with the piece.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi Mel :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Lot said in little words and a great picture to go along with. This is a melancholy little gem that many could relate to. Well done in a style that is eye catching.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi JoAnn :) Thank you for your lovely feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Well YOU haven't 'forgotten', Debs, and it's a shame he has appeared to. Very sad artwork to reflect the theme perfectly and dramatically.

I know it's none of my business, but a real long serious talk is required, with no interruptions, if not had already.

Cheers, Ray xx

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi Ray :)
Thank you x
This one was inspired by biographical stuff, but not actually biographical! We've done lots of talking, we're getting there....I hope.
Best wishes, Debs x

Comment from I am Cat

Excellent

Oh Debra,
this is really really GOOD! dammit! LOL
one by one really good ones are coming out...
NOW.. LOL awesomely done. Great luck in this contest. ;)
Cat

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi Cat :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This certainly is an excellent entry into the contest. Your words describe the situation perfectly and image works well with your poem. Much good luck in the content. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you so much, Marilyn :) I appreciate your lovely feedback and good luck wishes also! Kindest regards, Debra x

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I always seem to have a hard time reviewing these short poems. This one is pretty pleasant to read - simple but with an enchanting question

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you, Douglas :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is a perfect match.
It tells the story by its self.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Thank you, misscookie :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra :)

reply by misscookie on 01-Apr-2016

You're very welcome, have a nice day.
Cookie

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your antonym poem. Good job on the word choice for those words. The picture is perfect. Your poem is in good form and makes great sense. Good job and thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2016

Hi Jan :) Thank you so much for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Excellent contest entry for the antonym contest.
Exceptional way you put the remember and forget together.
What a wonderful unique was and in such a few words.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2016

Hello Barb :) Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)