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Falling Off The Edge

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A true story

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Comment from chasennov
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unning Against Time. Falling Off The Edge - Part Four.' A further excellent chapter you have created here, Ulla. I enjoyed the situation you found yourself in. I always try and imagine an outcome from bad situations. Very well done.

You obviously meant: 'Fortune favors the brave.'

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thank you so much. I am pleased that you enjoy the reading and for following. All the best. Ulla
reply by chasennov on 15-Mar-2016
    You are Welcome, Ulla.
Comment from mvbrooks
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It's an interesting story that makes you want to read more and find out if he gets the inheritance--and learn just who was the man at the funeral. Intriguing.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thank you so much. So pleased that you like it. All the best. Ulla
Comment from c_lucas
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Some people gather pleasure handing out bad news. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thanks a lot for this, Charlie. All the best. Ulla
reply by c_lucas on 16-Mar-2016
    You're welcome, Ulla. Charlie
Comment from Sherylsart
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Great reading, as always. A few spags to fix:

Maybe three hours, as I had no luggage, but it was to stretch it though. Better wording: ...luggage, it was a stretch, though.

He had helped me finding the perfect lawyer. Delete ing

she alienated herself to everybody who mattered, From instead of to

Can't wait for this little titbit." tidbit

Sounds like everything is working out for way.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thanks a lot for this Sheryl and I agree. I have made the changes. All the best. Ulla
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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An excellent story. This is the first I've read of the series, and would like to read more. It is even more compelling as it is true, and I've found that true stories tend to gather more attention than made up ones. I've written both, and there is something about true that lends authenticity.

Nicely done,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Ah, Rhonda , thank you so much. What a great review. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from MelB
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Definitely not a boring life. You left it with another cliffhanger, but I enjoy the suspense. Look forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thanks so much, Mel, I am glad that you enjoy. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment from Marvin Calloway
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Ulla
You and your cliff hangars, I love them. Another well written chapter. You cover all the details, large and small, very well, with never a doubt or a question. Let me know if you want me to send you a few typos.
Marv

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hi Marv, I'm sorry, can't help it though the cliff hangers I mean. So pleased that you like it. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Bryana
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I do believe tour lawyer was right!
You never lived a boring life, there's
always something new to discover
or resolved.
I'm here dear Ulla, waiting for the
next chapter.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Thanks a lot Bryana. Yeah, it was quite an experience. No, I have never had a boring life. Still don't. Un abrazo. Ulla
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
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No, Ulla, you certainly do not live a boring life. I am amazed at the number of countries you fly into and out of. The story is fascinating and I can't wait to read the next chapter to find out what happens with your inheritance, Giddy

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Hi Giddy, Thanks a lot for this great review. No, a boring life I've never had and still don't. I've lived in several countries and always travelled. Second nature to me. Flew for more than twenty years. But I'm not leaving Spain. This is my home now and will always be. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Sasha
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It is 2016, and I still don't have a cellphone. Absolutely dynamite chapter that kept me on the edge of my chair from beginning to end. I agree, so far, you life is anything BUT boring. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2016


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Sasha, Thanks ever so much for this wonderful review and the equally wonderful stars. You really made my day. No I've never had a boring life and still don't.
    How are you? Are you still getting better? Well, I hope so. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by Sasha on 15-Mar-2016
    I am better but still not completely healed. The doctor says possibly not for a full year.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
    Wow, Sasha, that is a long time. But as long as you make progress. Cross fingers. Ullaxx