Comment from Leineco

Excellent

I like that you followed death through the seasons, showing the endless cycle life and death that nature runs on :-)

I was thinking of entering this but all I came up with was one haiku (which really isn't a haiku cuz it includes humans. But our thoughts were similar. (though I had satori first)

efficiency,
unlike homo sapiens
nature recycles

:-)

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Hi Leineco, Many thanks for your support and for your review and rating, No go ahead and enter your Haiku I liked it and agree with your sentiment. Cheers my friend

Comment from koolaid228

Excellent

your poem is very open and direct, and clearly is easily understood, I like it! I feel a sense of color and reality in your words, which makes this a nice piece, thank you
for sharing. koolaid228

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2016

Hi koolaid228, Many thanks for reading and reviewing my haiku suite, I tried to think of the 'death ' of each season and came up with this.So glad you liked it. Many Cheers

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

As the genre goes, not bad. Why winter is always the villain in this genre always amazes me. I find winter refreshing and pleasant. Cold is not evil, and with modern civilization, is barely an inconvenience.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016

Hi Pyrrho, Thank you for your review rating and comments. Yes Winter always seems to cop it, but I am a fan of Summer and never look forward to the cold dark days of winter, cold is not evil just cold Brrrrrr LOL Cheers

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Very clever and season summary in this very eclectic
and exceptionally vivid and vibrant presentation.
Each phrase summons a flash kind of picture...
very creative cause and effect imagery.
Best of luck in prompt entry!


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 Comment Written 11-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Mar-2016

Hi Ronni. Why thank you so much for this lovely review and rating for my first Haiku suite. Your words for this are very encouraging Many Cheers to you