A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Five Little Letters"Assorted poems of love
32 total reviews
Comment from mvbrooks
What a fun poem in that it starts with a feeling of distress that so many of us have encountered--and ends with the sense of hope that fills the morning and the night. A nice way to describe the importance of human contact.
A suggestion -- consider removing the comma between "Up pops a message" as I didn't sense a natural pause after "up" -- but more of a distraction from the poem's rhythm.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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What a fun poem in that it starts with a feeling of distress that so many of us have encountered--and ends with the sense of hope that fills the morning and the night. A nice way to describe the importance of human contact.
A suggestion -- consider removing the comma between "Up pops a message" as I didn't sense a natural pause after "up" -- but more of a distraction from the poem's rhythm.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hi, MB. I have used your suggested change :) Thank you!
Thank you also, for using your valuable time to read and review my work :)
Missy
Comment from cedarsflee
The tone of the poem conveys the message and it's consistent throughout. I find no faults in this poem and I admire the choice of form or style you adopted here. Excellent rating well deserved. Good stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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The tone of the poem conveys the message and it's consistent throughout. I find no faults in this poem and I admire the choice of form or style you adopted here. Excellent rating well deserved. Good stuff.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hi C...thanks for the read and review :) It means a lot to me!
Always,
Missy
Comment from JTStone
That is a magnificent piece of art, Missy.
The image it brings up when I read it is fond memories. The times when we are so down on life or ourselves and a simple text can change the very outlook on a given situation.
Beautifully written girl.
Jimmy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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That is a magnificent piece of art, Missy.
The image it brings up when I read it is fond memories. The times when we are so down on life or ourselves and a simple text can change the very outlook on a given situation.
Beautifully written girl.
Jimmy
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Howdy, Jimmy, hon. thanks for the lovely review :) Your review, made my day :) Sorry so long on the reply.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Pantygynt
You have caught the magic of the message. Whoever the sender was he just happend to get the timing absolutely right. Timing is half the battle and so often there is nothing the message writer can do about it. This is a beautifully descriptive little piece. The description of the storm is brilliant ant then into its chaos pops the message.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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You have caught the magic of the message. Whoever the sender was he just happend to get the timing absolutely right. Timing is half the battle and so often there is nothing the message writer can do about it. This is a beautifully descriptive little piece. The description of the storm is brilliant ant then into its chaos pops the message.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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There you are, Gynt. :)
Thanks for liking this. I was living in that moment :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from ciliverde
Nice! I can feel the excitement steam off the page in those five letters - "hello". I know the feeling! Great presentation here too.
Carol
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Nice! I can feel the excitement steam off the page in those five letters - "hello". I know the feeling! Great presentation here too.
Carol
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hi, Carol. Thanks, hon for this lovely review.
Missy
Comment from MelB
Hi Missy, so nice to see a post from you! Fantastic artwork and a well penned poem. Great imagery with the soul on fire. So glad to have you back.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hi Missy, so nice to see a post from you! Fantastic artwork and a well penned poem. Great imagery with the soul on fire. So glad to have you back.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hi, M. Thanks for the review and the lovely welcome :)
Missy
Comment from jmdg1954
Dummy me. I read the title as "Five Little Words" so I went into it with that expectation. I loved it as I read it waiting for the five words and then, bam! Five letters... Nicely done!
John
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Dummy me. I read the title as "Five Little Words" so I went into it with that expectation. I loved it as I read it waiting for the five words and then, bam! Five letters... Nicely done!
John
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Hi, John, thanks sweetie for stopping by and leaving this review. Gave me a smile :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It made me smile when I read it. Great job. Teri
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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This is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It made me smile when I read it. Great job. Teri
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Teri, thank you sweetie for this lovely review :)
Missy
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you are so welcome. hugs, Teri
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. It's been a long time since I've seen a post from you? This more than makes up for the lull, though. This poem has a sort of meloncholy feel about it. I caan picture a scene with that lonely person getting such a message to brighten their night or day.
Bravo! Good job. Bob
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hi, Missy. It's been a long time since I've seen a post from you? This more than makes up for the lull, though. This poem has a sort of meloncholy feel about it. I caan picture a scene with that lonely person getting such a message to brighten their night or day.
Bravo! Good job. Bob
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Hi, Bob, thanks hon for the sweet review. Hugs on the publication :)
Missy
Comment from BeasPeas
A nicely written poem that expresses how our heart leaps when we hear from the one(s) we love. These are especially wonderful lines:
"Oh my love
The power of the written word
My soul on fire
With just five little letters ... "hello"
Suddenly the day holds
Promise"
Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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A nicely written poem that expresses how our heart leaps when we hear from the one(s) we love. These are especially wonderful lines:
"Oh my love
The power of the written word
My soul on fire
With just five little letters ... "hello"
Suddenly the day holds
Promise"
Marilyn
Comment Written 11-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Marilyn, it's so wonderful to be back and to get such a lovely review...Thank you!
Missy