Power Of Love
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Margaret,
yes Love is powerful and my Fs friend you said so with your powerful blast of words when you said-
even with your vices
I sill love you
Gert
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hello Margaret,
yes Love is powerful and my Fs friend you said so with your powerful blast of words when you said-
even with your vices
I sill love you
Gert
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hello Gert, thank you for the great review and for sharing thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
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Smiles Margaret.
Gert
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
When a petson have seen the good and the bad and are still love their mate that is true love and the real power of love is just that. As long it is not one sided and too destructive to either one
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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When a petson have seen the good and the bad and are still love their mate that is true love and the real power of love is just that. As long it is not one sided and too destructive to either one
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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thank you for the great review and for sharing thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Love teaches a person how to forgive because when you love someone you can forgive anything. You probably won't forget but that's part of the lesson too. Learning to cope. Nice little poem Margaret.xxx Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Love teaches a person how to forgive because when you love someone you can forgive anything. You probably won't forget but that's part of the lesson too. Learning to cope. Nice little poem Margaret.xxx Nancy
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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thank you for the great review and for sharing thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from suep
A powerful free verse poem. True words. I like the artwork you selected. Great format and presentation. The white words against the black reinforce the good/evil, light/darkness. Beautifully stated. Well done! :)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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A powerful free verse poem. True words. I like the artwork you selected. Great format and presentation. The white words against the black reinforce the good/evil, light/darkness. Beautifully stated. Well done! :)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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thank you for the great review and for sharing thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from Caressa_08
Quite a thought provoking poem, that yes, in one relationship, there can be still the one we love, that has done things that are not very nice, though we can still need that relationship, because we realize we, too have faults, or human beings sometimes go astray...Though, hope for your sake, if this is not a real confession of sort about what you have been through...and that the bad mistakes a lot of times are repeated, as then, a true broken heart can result.
Caressa_08
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Quite a thought provoking poem, that yes, in one relationship, there can be still the one we love, that has done things that are not very nice, though we can still need that relationship, because we realize we, too have faults, or human beings sometimes go astray...Though, hope for your sake, if this is not a real confession of sort about what you have been through...and that the bad mistakes a lot of times are repeated, as then, a true broken heart can result.
Caressa_08
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hello Caressa_08, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I'll give you more to think about ... perhaps the bad deeds are done to others outside of the relationship??? Again, this poem is just an observation of human of human relationships that many times leave me with the big question of Why??? Once again, thank you for your review. Stop by my writing pad again. LateBloomer
Comment from Mary Wakeford
I really like the imagery you have chosen for your freestyle poem, and the content of that is really terrific. You done a good job describing the good gal/bad guy or vice versa love connection. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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I really like the imagery you have chosen for your freestyle poem, and the content of that is really terrific. You done a good job describing the good gal/bad guy or vice versa love connection. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hello Mary Wakeford, thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
Comment from krys123
LateBloomer;
-how psychologically interesting but this is so true, when I come to think of it. I almost would like to say the best of two worlds but not the worst and best of two worlds in the combination with love.
-I consider the picture to be far out and that's anything of love is very relative to the concept and theme of your writing.
- Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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LateBloomer;
-how psychologically interesting but this is so true, when I come to think of it. I almost would like to say the best of two worlds but not the worst and best of two worlds in the combination with love.
-I consider the picture to be far out and that's anything of love is very relative to the concept and theme of your writing.
- Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 08-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Hellor krys123, Alex, Thank you for your review and for sharing your thoughts. For some, this essence of this poem might be easier to understand if you look at high profile people vs. everyday people. Once again, thank you for your great review. LateBloomer
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You are very welcome LateBloomer.
Alex
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is pretty thought provoking LB. Love is more complex than most of the writers here describe it. Your verse captures that complexity very well and your closing words are very srong
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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This is pretty thought provoking LB. Love is more complex than most of the writers here describe it. Your verse captures that complexity very well and your closing words are very srong
Comment Written 08-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2016
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Thank you, DP. I was almost going to use the word evil vs. bad deeds, but then I thought that some of the readers/reviewers would feel as if I were getting into judging too harshly, but in the real world a lot evil doers exits. Once again, thank you for your review. I'm not expecting a lot of reviews on this poem because it's not sugary and doesn't leave the reader with that ahh feeling. Stop by my writing pad again.
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great poem you have penned. It is so very true. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It was a joy to read and to review it. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
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This is a really great poem you have penned. It is so very true. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. It was a joy to read and to review it. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
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Hello Teri, Thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. LateBloomer
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you are so welcome. hugs, Teri
Comment from fastdigits
A tale of imperfect people living in
an imperfect world told in an artistry
of words that spill down the page
emphasizing both the power of love
and also the other dark side, the
destruction; yet love always wins
out; love is not meant to be judgmental,
but rather feelings from deep inside.
Well done
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
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A tale of imperfect people living in
an imperfect world told in an artistry
of words that spill down the page
emphasizing both the power of love
and also the other dark side, the
destruction; yet love always wins
out; love is not meant to be judgmental,
but rather feelings from deep inside.
Well done
Comment Written 08-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2016
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Thank you, fd. I told you that my muse has been whispering some un-sweet stuff and, like a dog with a bone, won't let it go. Thank you for your great review and for sharing your thoughts. I truly appreciate the time spent. Poems that don't say "ahh" do not fare as well as others. I'll know more "when the countin's done. Once again, thank you. LateBloomer