Comment from writeapoem

Excellent

this is such a heartwarming rhyme and message and should be a help to all who read your fine work. The style and form of your work is written remarkably. The way you lift up Christ in your poem is honorable and should teach all who read to place there trust in him.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for the kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate your insights. Thank you for stopping by to read and taking time to review. Bless you.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Excellent rondeau redouble. A beautiful stained glass window to compliment your well chosen words. Good rhyme and alliteration in your powerful message.

Well done.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for the encouraging review. Thank you for your comments about the writing and the message.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A very well composed spiritual poem that is obvious that you spent some time composing this wonderful poetic verse. Excellent.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thank you for stopping by to give you kind comments and encouragement. I appreciate it.

Comment from Eve Bailey

Exceptional

I give you six stars and find this writing amazing. It speaks to my heart and my faith, It invites us into a life with the Savior. It reaches down in my soul and feeds me. Your writing should be an inspiration to everyone who reads it. Great work!!

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

Thank you for such an enthusiastic review. I appreciate the extra sixth star and your uplifting comments. I am so pleased that this verse speaks to your heart and your faith. It is one of the nicest things I've ever heard. Thank you so much!

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A very nice poem-I can surely say you've created some strong images and emotions. Your words are well chosen.

Thanks for sharing--

Bill

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Hi Bill,

Thank you for dropping in to read and taking time to review. I appreciate the encouraging comments about the writing.
Debi

Comment from Writingfundimension

Exceptional

'Come, take my hand and walk with me.
That burden that you bear, it's shed.
Bright hope has won the victory.
Pure love is where your path has led...
for you are mine.'

Such a beautiful faith-filled poem, Debi. I really like the repeating line: accept from me the broken bread. Broken... much like we are so often.

Great job!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Hi Bev,
Thank you for the wonderful response to this poem. I agree with you insights about the broken bread. Thank you for the generous six star rating. You made me smile.
Debi

Comment from okanaganbell

Excellent

very good, i like the picture with the poem. your message is very clear and i had no problem understanding it, however some of your rhyme scheme is off for me, i tried a few times. but i do think you put a lot of thought into the words to send your message, good job on that.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2016

It may be regional pronunciation that is throwing you off. I know I run across words all the time that don't rhyme because of several available pronunciations. Among them: sure, toward, wolf, contrite, been ...
I do appreciate you stopping by to read and review. Thank you.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Love and hope are spirutual connections I this poem. The hope of eternal love and worshiping the Lord is such a spiritual theme. Nicely done! liberty justice

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for the encouraging comments and for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate it.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is quite a tricky form to deal with because each stanza has to make good sense as well as conform to the rhyming pattern and the fourth line being dropped in each time from a given line in the first stanza. It is a verbal jigsaw puzzle - now where did I put that bit of blue sky with a flat edge?

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Well I like logic puzzles and crypto quotes so this form probably fits in that category. Thanks for the review. I appreciate you stopping by.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A beautiful Rondeau Redouble. Jesus claims us, as His own. He offers us His broken bread the symbol of His body that He share with us.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for you lovely review and the insights you share on the theme. I appreciate the encouraging comments. Bless you.