Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is an interesting form. I like short line poems like this. You did a great job with your entry. I wish you well in the contest.

teresa

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

Thanks so much. Really appreciate your time.

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

Beautiful poetry of friendship ...longing nicely done in iambic monometer. .a form ne to me but looks interesting best of luck

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016

They are fun to write, you should try it.

Comment from Cheryl9359

Excellent

I really like your poem, you did a great job with that two syllables each line, I just saw this contest and was thinking of trying it myself but I don't know lol! Your poem is great though good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

You should try it they are fun. I actually started that contest so I would love to see you enter. Thank you so much for the grand review.

Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

You met all the criteria for a two syllable poem and the content of love from a time gone passed was beautifully stated. It not easy to give such a picturesque experience with so few words. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for you lovely review.

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

This style of poetic expression when
done with style and grace moves
down the page in undulating waves
of emotion which wash over you like
a clear mountain stream.
Your entry into this contest has
moved effortlessly in warmness
to convey a love that will never die.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you for such a wonderful review.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good a great job on the prompt, well written and great thought. Good luck in the contest withbthis. have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you so much, I appreciate your kind review.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Wonderful poem that does more than just fit the prompt. Wow girlie. May I borrow your magical pen please. Outstanding to say the least. If I had ten stars they'd be yours. I mean it...

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

HAHAHA,, that's pretty nice comments for a mono what? LOL You may borrow my pen, but be warned it dries up more oft than not. hehehe

reply by foxangie123 on 28-Jan-2016

That's funny. You are awesome..

Comment from Jacqueline1616

Excellent

This touches my heart. I feel this one on personal level. The picture is very unusual. What exactly is that? Anyway, lovely and unusual and a very different form of poetry to me.
Jackie

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

They are kind of fun to write, you should give it a go. Thanks so much for the review. I'm not sure what the artwork is exactly, it just makes me think of reaching into that other realm

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

Really nice work on such a strict format. I love the sentiment in this piece. Also, very nice of you to include someone else's work along side of your own.

All the best,
Russell

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

I miss Brooke, she was a good poet, when I created the contest I used hers as an example. Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This is a really good response to the prompt. The lines carry a lot of meaning and paint a good image of your emotions. Well done

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 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thanks so much. I created that prompt so thought I'd better at least put something in there. You should give it a go!