Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author, This is a really good entry for this particular competition, What an unashamedly romantic and wonderfully penned love poem, great use of description and imagery and I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Really glad you enjoyed. I'll cross my fingers, but this great response already has me smiling. Much thanks. :))

reply by Eric1 on 22-Dec-2015

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

As we get older, I think most people hope of having that special person with whom they can share their remaining days. I think your poem expresses this feeling quite well. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

I'm so pleased you took it as I meant it. :))
Thank you kindly.

reply by victor 66 on 22-Dec-2015

You are most welcome.

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I love this idea for a love poem, the picture really compliments your words, together you kind of see your own grand parents rocking away. Good look for the contest, a great contender.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

Thank you so much. Yes, that was the idea. :))

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, great use of the words to create a monorhyme with the ING endings. I love the picture that you chose. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 21-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015

So pleased you enjoyed. Thank you kindly. :))