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Comment from Jacob Collins
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French was the one language at school which I didn't learn, everyone else did but I only learnt Spanish, so I'm afraid I can't help you with any language issues here but I thought this was an original idea, using the French language in poetry even though I couldn't understand it. Thanks for sharing...Jacob

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 Comment Written 17-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    LOL! Thanks, Jacob. Should I put a translation?
reply by Jacob Collins on 17-Nov-2015
    Perhaps it would be an idea to translate it in your notes section, just a thought...Jacob
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
    That was a good idea, Jacob. I inserted a translation in the author's notes.
reply by Jacob Collins on 17-Nov-2015
    I've had a read of the English translation now and its a very good piece, thanks again for sharing...Jacob