Comment from Dean Kuch

Exceptional

I loved everything about this haiku light contest entry. The fabulous presentation, the 4-7-5 syllable count and the very clever satori line...
...P-e-R-R-R-r-r-r-f-e-c-t...

I wish you all the luck in the world in the voting booth.

With admiration
~Dean :}

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :) Thank you handsome. :) I appreciate the six stars.

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A charming haiku. the illustration is particularly striking. I like the positive feel of this work. An excellent entry for the contest. Well written and observed.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I really love the art work
for these words written.
I really loved the last line
"early bird special."
Wonderful words written.

Honey tree.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

reply by honeytree on 17-Nov-2015

Loved what you wrote

Honeytree

Comment from lightink

Excellent

That's quite a genius satori line, Mystery Author! (Your presentation gives you away though :)... In Hungarian we say - "those who rise early, find gold"
Those golden beams on the picture are sure priceless! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :) You are from Hungary? That is awesome.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Haiku(first morning light), is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to bot read and review a poem of this standard.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

Comment from pierre poote'

Excellent

I enjoyed your very tranquil poem. just what i needed before bed. hope to have pleasant dreams now. your picture selection gave a vivid image to your excellent poem. good write. )):

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

Comment from LanceHill

Excellent

This is a beautiful haiku. You have penned the picture well. The beauty described matches that of the picture. Thank you for sharing. God bless.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Beautiful imagery and I love your satori. Your light haiku should fare quite well in the contest. Good luck to you.
teresa

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

Ha! Early bird special. Early bird gets the worm they say. Love this breath taking view this artwork delivered. Wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this light contest. A sure contender.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. :)

reply by Neonewman on 16-Nov-2015

My pleasure!

reply by Anonymous Member on 19-Nov-2015

My pleasure!

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

one of the most beautiful times of the of the day...sunrise...and sunset as well...I love the wording in your poem...and the picture is stunning...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2015

Thank you very much for such a positive review and kind words.

reply by l.raven on 15-Nov-2015

you are always so welcome...xxoo luff