Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Wow! I just read the description of what you have to do with your poem. I'm astounded that it can be that intricately difficult. You did it, though, and if I had a six you would have it now.

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Thank you again, Jay.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Aiona,

Your poem is wonderfully written and is a very good read. I don't think I've ever heard of a Diamante type of poem before. I wouldn't want to try writing it as there are way too many things to follow. I'll just continue writing from my heart with God's help. ( ;

Kat

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Thank you, MizKat.

reply by MizKat on 11-Nov-2015

You are so welcome. Kat

Comment from GracieAnn

Exceptional

Aiona,
This Diamante Poetry Contest entry fulfills the requirements of the contest with its structure, abidance to the word choices and powerful message. Well done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2015

Thank you, GracieAnn. You are very kind.