Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Innocent children suffer"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from Erin929
So sad, you can definitely feel the heart wrenching grief of the parents. This is best as a free style poem, wise choice.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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So sad, you can definitely feel the heart wrenching grief of the parents. This is best as a free style poem, wise choice.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Wow Erin I am so pleased with your exceptional rating for my poem much appreciated
Comment from Lovinia
Hi Mystery Poet
You have certainly encompassed suffering here. Not of that dear little child, but the suffering and loss of a parent. But it all goes hand in hand. A mother hates to see her child suffer ... to lose a child .. unbearable pain. Good presentation and dedication to the parents who suffer such a loss ... to cancer ... to illness/tragedy/accident of any kind. Your poem is heartfelt and that comes to the reader in your free verse poem. You arouse strong emotions, but in a good way that heals. I hope this is not personal experience, if so my heartfelt sympathies. If you have just put yourself into this situation and have written it for other, well done, you've succeeded in capturing the intensity of the suffering. An excellent entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Warmest regards - Lovinia xoxo
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Hi Mystery Poet
You have certainly encompassed suffering here. Not of that dear little child, but the suffering and loss of a parent. But it all goes hand in hand. A mother hates to see her child suffer ... to lose a child .. unbearable pain. Good presentation and dedication to the parents who suffer such a loss ... to cancer ... to illness/tragedy/accident of any kind. Your poem is heartfelt and that comes to the reader in your free verse poem. You arouse strong emotions, but in a good way that heals. I hope this is not personal experience, if so my heartfelt sympathies. If you have just put yourself into this situation and have written it for other, well done, you've succeeded in capturing the intensity of the suffering. An excellent entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck. Warmest regards - Lovinia xoxo
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2015
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2015
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Thanks Lovina for a most encouraging review for my poem I really appreciat it.
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My pleasure. I liked your poem despite the poignancy. Hugs - Lovi xoxo