Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "senryu (in my hands)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
23 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi You! Geez, now this is funny...I love the double entrendre...
sometimes I think I take life to seriously, and then i read some of you humor and i think...yup, loosen up gal...thanks for the laugh...(first day back to work onmy day job after 10 holidays...I needed a bit of lightness...)
padumachitta
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Hi You! Geez, now this is funny...I love the double entrendre...
sometimes I think I take life to seriously, and then i read some of you humor and i think...yup, loosen up gal...thanks for the laugh...(first day back to work onmy day job after 10 holidays...I needed a bit of lightness...)
padumachitta
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Glad I relieved your stress if only for a few minutes. Bet you'll think of this every time anyone sneezes into a hanky now.
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oh ya...and so hoping I don't get a winter cold!
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Comment from IndianaIrish
Hahaha oh, Shari, this is a wonderful Senryu. Your sense of humor and irony is always right on. It's Ike this format was made for your humor. Loved it!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)88$$)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Hahaha oh, Shari, this is a wonderful Senryu. Your sense of humor and irony is always right on. It's Ike this format was made for your humor. Loved it!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)88$$)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Karen. Just wish I would get inspired more often. :-)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
This made me smile. I work in retail and you know how many people don't cover their mouths when they cough and sneeze. Its disgusting. You did a fantastic job and great job wording this
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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This made me smile. I work in retail and you know how many people don't cover their mouths when they cough and sneeze. Its disgusting. You did a fantastic job and great job wording this
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Thanks, Meghan.
Comment from Nan Beeson
Shari:
This one totally took me by surprise! I am still laughing! The picture of the gal ala her expression with the Kleenex and her mouth wide open ready for what may come looks like it was
made especially for this poem. And all of that in only twelve syllables!
in my hands
an unused Kleenex
waits for blow job
Had to read it one more time!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Shari:
This one totally took me by surprise! I am still laughing! The picture of the gal ala her expression with the Kleenex and her mouth wide open ready for what may come looks like it was
made especially for this poem. And all of that in only twelve syllables!
in my hands
an unused Kleenex
waits for blow job
Had to read it one more time!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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I chose that picture for that express reason. Glad you saw it.:-)
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It was so obvious, I didn't want to give myself away so didn't say much, your sexy gal! Ha!
Comment from Curly Girly
Well, that's a shocker! I wonder what the poetry police will have to say about this, lol! My next question lurks: And who is the lucky guy? Shhh ... Don't tell. I'll keep guessing. Thank goodness for Kleensex!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Well, that's a shocker! I wonder what the poetry police will have to say about this, lol! My next question lurks: And who is the lucky guy? Shhh ... Don't tell. I'll keep guessing. Thank goodness for Kleensex!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Kleensex--good one, Nicole. Yeap, keep guessing. :-)
Comment from robyn corum
YOU are sooooooo bad.
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But CAN be more than a little funny.
hahahhahahahaha
Where on earth did you get that pic??!!!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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YOU are sooooooo bad.
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But CAN be more than a little funny.
hahahhahahahaha
Where on earth did you get that pic??!!!!!!!!!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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Google images. Its works for both meanings. LOL
LOL
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Duh.
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Ohhhhh!!!!
Comment from Louise Michelle
LOL - Nice to see you post something a little naughty, Shari. You've been Miss Goody Two Shoes for a while.
I wish that sneezing was just my allergy reaction. It affects my head - sinus pain and even upsets my stomach.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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LOL - Nice to see you post something a little naughty, Shari. You've been Miss Goody Two Shoes for a while.
I wish that sneezing was just my allergy reaction. It affects my head - sinus pain and even upsets my stomach.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2015
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My muse told me to behave myself, but she turned her back today.
You sure you're not pregnant? LOL
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LOL - today I'm fine. The symptoms come and go. No rhyme or reason. What you wrote (email) was really good. You should post that for the fellow on the forum. Better yet, see if you can use it for a poem or prose. Yes - write a light hearted warning about being taken advantage of when self-publishing.
Comment from judiverse
Oh, this is funny. Just what I needed on this rather gloomy day. Your satori line is really unexpected, so it makes a perfect conclusion. The title could suggest anything, so you really build up. Great job. Too bad this isn't for a contest. judi
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Oh, this is funny. Just what I needed on this rather gloomy day. Your satori line is really unexpected, so it makes a perfect conclusion. The title could suggest anything, so you really build up. Great job. Too bad this isn't for a contest. judi
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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Thanks, judi. I'd only put it in a contest that displayed my name. I lost the First Line one in a nasty defeat. but I did get 33 reviews or more. That soothe my ego.
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You're welcome. I never get that many reviews without promote, promote. judi
Comment from Eigle Rull
HA! I love this one. Like usual, you are straight-forward with words that make the meaning clear. This doesn't have to be nasty. It can be taken either way. However, I must admit that I took it the nasty way first. HA! What a cute littler post. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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HA! I love this one. Like usual, you are straight-forward with words that make the meaning clear. This doesn't have to be nasty. It can be taken either way. However, I must admit that I took it the nasty way first. HA! What a cute littler post. Best wishes, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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That's the fun of senryu. It can be interpreted two ways.
Comment from Sasha
You have a marvelous way of muddling up mu mind making me wonder if I over-thought your meaning or if I have just turned into a dirty old lady...probably both. This is hysterical no mater which way I read it. Great job, as always.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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You have a marvelous way of muddling up mu mind making me wonder if I over-thought your meaning or if I have just turned into a dirty old lady...probably both. This is hysterical no mater which way I read it. Great job, as always.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2015
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C'mon, Smurph. You know I love to get down and dirty. :-)