2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "1/6/1 (Blue)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
55 total reviews
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hi Gypsy Rose. Blue as defined as a hue instead of a color is brilliant given the color's transparency to reflect the true meaning of peace. Take care and Cheers.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Hi Gypsy Rose. Blue as defined as a hue instead of a color is brilliant given the color's transparency to reflect the true meaning of peace. Take care and Cheers.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Benjamin :)
Comment from Rubylou
Beautiful 1-6-1 poem. It is so difficult to get all the meaning in so few words. You have managed to convey your feeling in a well presented piece. Nice touch with the flow of blue water and the hint of a blue moon.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Beautiful 1-6-1 poem. It is so difficult to get all the meaning in so few words. You have managed to convey your feeling in a well presented piece. Nice touch with the flow of blue water and the hint of a blue moon.
Rubylou
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Rubylou :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
WOW - when we read the poem and see the splendid presentation, who could doubt that blue is this author's favourite colour? This is a very beautiful little poem (and since it is SUCH a short form, it NEEDS the intensity seen here, IMO). Nicely done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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WOW - when we read the poem and see the splendid presentation, who could doubt that blue is this author's favourite colour? This is a very beautiful little poem (and since it is SUCH a short form, it NEEDS the intensity seen here, IMO). Nicely done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Dawn :)
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You're very welcome. :)
Comment from Nosha17
What a lovely picture with its brilliant blue. Well chosen words to convey your thoughts. Your message is true blue. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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What a lovely picture with its brilliant blue. Well chosen words to convey your thoughts. Your message is true blue. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Faye :)
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a fantastic 1-6-1 poem for this contest. The moving image is brilliant,
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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This is a fantastic 1-6-1 poem for this contest. The moving image is brilliant,
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 05-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2015
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Thank you Mary :)
Comment from robyn corum
Oh, my! Although this is a quality poem and you have definitely met the criteria of the 1-6-1 contest, I always have such a problem commenting on these short pieces. Please forgive me! I see nothing to comment negatively on -- kudos!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Oh, my! Although this is a quality poem and you have definitely met the criteria of the 1-6-1 contest, I always have such a problem commenting on these short pieces. Please forgive me! I see nothing to comment negatively on -- kudos!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from poetadeu
This is a new form for contest, I suppose.
Just think of the possibilities. This is
very grand with words and the motion of the
water in the art. Gorgeous image you came
up with for this writing style. Best wishes
in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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This is a new form for contest, I suppose.
Just think of the possibilities. This is
very grand with words and the motion of the
water in the art. Gorgeous image you came
up with for this writing style. Best wishes
in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Christof McTarnahan
Well, as far as six-word poems go, this is quite nice. The color blue is perfect and sets a tranquil tone. I am always fascinated by mathematical poetry. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Well, as far as six-word poems go, this is quite nice. The color blue is perfect and sets a tranquil tone. I am always fascinated by mathematical poetry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from zanya
Simplicity is indeed the key here , in this 1-6-1 - the pure , unembellished expression of the sheer beauty of Nature's gifts to us to admire and revere and a beautiful 'live' illustration
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Simplicity is indeed the key here , in this 1-6-1 - the pure , unembellished expression of the sheer beauty of Nature's gifts to us to admire and revere and a beautiful 'live' illustration
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Janet Foor
Amazing picture to complement your 1/6/1 poem, 'Blue'. The syllable count is perfect and each line rhymes. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Amazing picture to complement your 1/6/1 poem, 'Blue'. The syllable count is perfect and each line rhymes. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)