A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I Am Your Canvas"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I would consider this a shape poem, well done. You are his canvas, use bright colours of our passion. His love fills you. The pink is for the satisfaction that you two get.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Excellent artwork that complements your poem perfectly. I would consider this a shape poem, well done. You are his canvas, use bright colours of our passion. His love fills you. The pink is for the satisfaction that you two get.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Wonderful review, thank you so much, Robina. I am glad to see that you got the same feelings from the poem as I did while writing it. :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Very passionate piece of work influenced by the picture. Shows a good and vivid imagination. LOL. Lovely use of metaphor throughout the poem. I particularly like 'outline me with the blackest of black to keep me safe within your gaze'. Very well written and very well displayed. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Very passionate piece of work influenced by the picture. Shows a good and vivid imagination. LOL. Lovely use of metaphor throughout the poem. I particularly like 'outline me with the blackest of black to keep me safe within your gaze'. Very well written and very well displayed. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Hi Dorothy, Thank you so much for the splendid review. Your review is like the icing on a cake for me. Validation of hitting where it is suppose to :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from barkingdog
I love the way you took the picture and were able to see so much in it. Your descriptions are wonderful and would hold even without the picture.
The closing is priceless. 'Color me ... radiant.'
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I love the way you took the picture and were able to see so much in it. Your descriptions are wonderful and would hold even without the picture.
The closing is priceless. 'Color me ... radiant.'
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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BD, you are such a wonderful artist and for you to give me this wonderful review makes me feel like I am doing something right!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Always,
Missy
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a poem of love for a woman to her man. Saying that any on the beauty he paints is because of what he gives her. She must also think she is pretty to describe herself this way in order for him to paint her. I also gives the idea that they are somehow melded into one.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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This is a poem of love for a woman to her man. Saying that any on the beauty he paints is because of what he gives her. She must also think she is pretty to describe herself this way in order for him to paint her. I also gives the idea that they are somehow melded into one.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I love how you saw this poem DP. Melded into one...poetic in itself :) Thank you ever so much for this wonderful review.
Always,
Missy
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You are so very welcome, Missy.
Joan
Comment from Bryana
Lovely poem my friend. I can visualize all those
colors, all lively colors, reminds me of the colors
at the beginning of spring, light and brilliant.
I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.
Have a nice week.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Lovely poem my friend. I can visualize all those
colors, all lively colors, reminds me of the colors
at the beginning of spring, light and brilliant.
I enjoyed reading your beautiful poem.
Have a nice week.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Bryana, thank you so much for this splendid review. I am pleased you enjoyed it :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from watergirl
This is a beautiful poem about one's love, and how rich and varied that relationship can be. The colour denotes vibrancy and vitality, and you now the meaning of the colours - brown earthiness, red desire, etc. A nicely writ poem that works well.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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This is a beautiful poem about one's love, and how rich and varied that relationship can be. The colour denotes vibrancy and vitality, and you now the meaning of the colours - brown earthiness, red desire, etc. A nicely writ poem that works well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Hi there, thanks for the lovely review WG. I am delighted you found this worth reading and leaving a review such as this :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Lulube
Like color me love. Beautifully sculpted. Love the breakdown of descriptive colors for a touch or view, especially, the last color, rose petal pink for the look of satisfaction your love fills me. lovely line.
Great photo, lots to see in that.
great penning
lulube
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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Like color me love. Beautifully sculpted. Love the breakdown of descriptive colors for a touch or view, especially, the last color, rose petal pink for the look of satisfaction your love fills me. lovely line.
Great photo, lots to see in that.
great penning
lulube
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2015
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I am thrilled that you felt this was worthy of the extra bling. Your review has me smiling this Tuesday morning, my friend :)
Always,
Missy
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welcome missy
lulube good day to you too
Comment from Janet Foor
The artwork is truly amazing and you have created a brilliant piece to compliment it. the presentation adds to the color pallet of the piece ending in radiance. Well done.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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The artwork is truly amazing and you have created a brilliant piece to compliment it. the presentation adds to the color pallet of the piece ending in radiance. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much JM for this excellent review of my work. Know that I am smiling :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Zachary_Edmond
The imagery in this is simply breathtaking. The comparisons of self and earth i really loved, and felt that it reflected in a very succinct way the image you shared alongside it. The emotion in the image is very well said in this poem, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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The imagery in this is simply breathtaking. The comparisons of self and earth i really loved, and felt that it reflected in a very succinct way the image you shared alongside it. The emotion in the image is very well said in this poem, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Oh Zach, thank you hon for this lovely review :)
I am smiling while reading this!!!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Very pleasing, justafan. The illustration shouts your words, and they are so romantic too. I do like your presentation, you obviously worked really hard on this poem. It was brilliant. xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Very pleasing, justafan. The illustration shouts your words, and they are so romantic too. I do like your presentation, you obviously worked really hard on this poem. It was brilliant. xsx Sandra
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Oh Ms. Sandra, thank you so much!!! I had numerous request for the font to be larger, but I had to settle or throw something...lol.
I am extremely happy that you found this pleasing :)
Always,
Missy