Yes I Hear You Knocking
But do I let you in28 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This set of quatrains reminds me of that old Fats Domino song thay Dave Edmunds covered back in the 70's. It probably occurs a lot, that an old flame who burns you comes back around. Once burnt ...
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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This set of quatrains reminds me of that old Fats Domino song thay Dave Edmunds covered back in the 70's. It probably occurs a lot, that an old flame who burns you comes back around. Once burnt ...
Comment Written 30-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you Bill..Have been away for while and have not been able to write or review Hope that is past me now and I can write away !!!!
TK
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a piece told as a reminder to beware.
what is the old saying? Once bitten twice shy?
the rhyme is great and the flow is good.
Nicely done
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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What a piece told as a reminder to beware.
what is the old saying? Once bitten twice shy?
the rhyme is great and the flow is good.
Nicely done
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thanks Barb I have been away for a while so have not been writing or reviewing lately Hope that has ended and I can write and read and review once again
TK
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very good poem. Once burned, twice shy. It's hard to trust someone who has betrayed us. This is a straight forward, interesting, clearly written piece that I enjoyed reading. My kind of poetry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This is a very good poem. Once burned, twice shy. It's hard to trust someone who has betrayed us. This is a straight forward, interesting, clearly written piece that I enjoyed reading. My kind of poetry. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you so very much Marilyn...Been away for awhile just catching up on my replies and readings this week
TK
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, TK...
_ Risky business letting an old love back in that dumped you once. Dump you once----she/he will probably dump you twice when another comes along.
_ Murphy's Law of romance 101. (*<*)
_ Nice to see you pop up---been wondering what happened to you.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Hi, TK...
_ Risky business letting an old love back in that dumped you once. Dump you once----she/he will probably dump you twice when another comes along.
_ Murphy's Law of romance 101. (*<*)
_ Nice to see you pop up---been wondering what happened to you.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you much Lady J. I have been away from computer for a while Just had smart phone and very hard to type on it with my big ole fingers... So hopefully I will be back on for a while
TK
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Hey, nice to hear from you! (*<*)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Choices! choices! Life and love are brimming with them.
A scene is set well, and inner turmoil is highlighted perfectly.
The tale unfolds with a logical sequence and sets me thinking about the honesty in the words.
It seems just as it is.
Well done.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Choices! choices! Life and love are brimming with them.
A scene is set well, and inner turmoil is highlighted perfectly.
The tale unfolds with a logical sequence and sets me thinking about the honesty in the words.
It seems just as it is.
Well done.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you so much Shirley I have been away for a few days again is the reason for delay in responding..Hope to be able to read and write again like before now that things have settled down some
TKThanks again
Comment from poetadeu
This takes me back in more than one way. I remember an
old song that had a line saying, 'Keep a knocking, but you can't come in', then repeats it. Maybe Ertha Kit recorded
it, if memory serves me. I like the rhythm and ending rhyme.
The art is perfect...Thank you.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This takes me back in more than one way. I remember an
old song that had a line saying, 'Keep a knocking, but you can't come in', then repeats it. Maybe Ertha Kit recorded
it, if memory serves me. I like the rhythm and ending rhyme.
The art is perfect...Thank you.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thanks again poetadeu.. Little Richard I think also recorded "I Hear You Knocking " Have to look that one up not positive.
TK
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Yes, I think so...LOL
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Yes, I think so...LOL
Comment from krys123
TK;
-A somewhat suspenseful and very well written romantic poem that I enjoyed reading very much as I was entertained quite relatively.
-Your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm to flow smoothly.
-In rhythmic meter, cadence, timing and tempo wall helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-The picture sets the tone for the poem and is very relative and complementary to it also.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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TK;
-A somewhat suspenseful and very well written romantic poem that I enjoyed reading very much as I was entertained quite relatively.
-Your rhyming words were contingent to the meaning and concept of each line therefore making the rhythm to flow smoothly.
-In rhythmic meter, cadence, timing and tempo wall helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
-The picture sets the tone for the poem and is very relative and complementary to it also.
-Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you forever.
Alex
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you Alex Been away for awhile so have feel far behind in my repiles as well as reviews Hope things will be back to normal for a while where I can read and write as before
TK
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You are welcome TK and take your time and relax you get back to normal
Alex
Comment from nomi338
Go slowly my brother, trust your gut instincts. Lying eyes can seem oh so sweet until you look beyond their sweetness and see the connivance hidden there behind a poisonous smile. Or she may be sincere, what do I know? LOL.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Go slowly my brother, trust your gut instincts. Lying eyes can seem oh so sweet until you look beyond their sweetness and see the connivance hidden there behind a poisonous smile. Or she may be sincere, what do I know? LOL.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thanks for the great review Sir Nomi and you your advice as well.lol Been away for a while reason for the delayed response
TK
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No worries, good to hear from you anytime.
Comment from K. Lorraine
Welcome back Sir Knight...
Another well written and heart touching personal poem...
I love your new look and that devilish smirk is a welcome sight.
Best wishes my friend.
Lady K.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Welcome back Sir Knight...
Another well written and heart touching personal poem...
I love your new look and that devilish smirk is a welcome sight.
Best wishes my friend.
Lady K.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you Lady K. for both the great review and liking my devilish look lol I have been away for awhile is the reason for the delay in responding to you
TK
Comment from judiverse
This is great. It sounds like a song. Excellent ABCB rhyme. The narrator questions the woman's motives for coming back, knocking on his door again. He's not so sure he wants to take her back, because of the tricks she's played on him in the past. Sounds like she really has a sob story about how she still loves him and has missed him. He's right to play it cool, Can he trust her again? Great work. judi
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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This is great. It sounds like a song. Excellent ABCB rhyme. The narrator questions the woman's motives for coming back, knocking on his door again. He's not so sure he wants to take her back, because of the tricks she's played on him in the past. Sounds like she really has a sob story about how she still loves him and has missed him. He's right to play it cool, Can he trust her again? Great work. judi
Comment Written 29-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2015
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Thank you very much Judi .. Nah would never trust her again and I like playing it cool anyway lol Been away for a while is the reason for the delay in responding sorry
TK
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Hope you were enjoying yourself while you were away. You're very welcome, and take care. judi