A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "My Fear"Assorted poems of love
27 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Missy, this is lovely and also sad. You are looking for the everlasting passion in love. I don't think it just like that. But a warm loving and lasting relationship is certainly possible. It has to be nourished though. I enjoyed reading. A really beautiful poem. All best. Ulla
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Missy, this is lovely and also sad. You are looking for the everlasting passion in love. I don't think it just like that. But a warm loving and lasting relationship is certainly possible. It has to be nourished though. I enjoyed reading. A really beautiful poem. All best. Ulla
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Possibly Ulla, but not what I see and feel at this point in my life. Tired of trying ... just settle I guess. Now, I just write my dreams :)
Thank you, sweetie, for the lovely and kind review.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Pantygynt
I think it is a poem and a sad little one at that. I wish your hart had also told you to put an appropriate word in capitals under the second stanza too. Perhaps moving the EVERYNIGHT to the bottom of S2 and putting TONIGHT under S1 or maybe the other way around - but I'm not your heart.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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I think it is a poem and a sad little one at that. I wish your hart had also told you to put an appropriate word in capitals under the second stanza too. Perhaps moving the EVERYNIGHT to the bottom of S2 and putting TONIGHT under S1 or maybe the other way around - but I'm not your heart.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Hi there P, I have made a change per your suggestion. Thank you, for such a great review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Dawn Munro
OUCH. This poem addresses an all-too-common ailment in many relationships after "the bloom is off the rose". (See - your artwork is chosen well! It's beautiful, but fitting too.) I also enjoyed the flow - this free verse sounds very natural when read aloud.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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OUCH. This poem addresses an all-too-common ailment in many relationships after "the bloom is off the rose". (See - your artwork is chosen well! It's beautiful, but fitting too.) I also enjoyed the flow - this free verse sounds very natural when read aloud.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2015
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Hi woman!! How the heck are ya?
Thanks for this insightful review and for using your valuable time to read and review my work. I appreciate it so much.
Always,
Missy
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You're very welcome.
Comment from pbroussard209
I thought this was lovely. I don't know what make a poem and what doesn't I just try to rhyme and I call it a poem, lol.
It's always scary when that spark starts to fade. But companionship is often times the next step in the evolution of love. It's not the exciting part but its the glue that binds two people together. But you have to rekindle that spark often enough not to get stuck in the friendship zone.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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I thought this was lovely. I don't know what make a poem and what doesn't I just try to rhyme and I call it a poem, lol.
It's always scary when that spark starts to fade. But companionship is often times the next step in the evolution of love. It's not the exciting part but its the glue that binds two people together. But you have to rekindle that spark often enough not to get stuck in the friendship zone.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Grrrr the friendship zone... I have plenty of friends, but it is not what I desire in a partner. :)
Thanks hon for the splendid review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from CR Delport
This is nicely written and very touching. It is difficult to keep that fire burning over a long period of time. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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This is nicely written and very touching. It is difficult to keep that fire burning over a long period of time. Good job.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Yes mam it sure is...Thanks for the caring review Christelle.
Always,
Missy
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there sweet Missy
What a tender poem of love and emotion
You make the reader feel ad for your loss of his emotional support. Very evocative my friend. Thank you for sharing the innermost part of your poetic heart
Bear
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Hey there sweet Missy
What a tender poem of love and emotion
You make the reader feel ad for your loss of his emotional support. Very evocative my friend. Thank you for sharing the innermost part of your poetic heart
Bear
Comment Written 27-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2015
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Aww...thanks Bear for the lovely review and the bling of the sixer.
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Yes indeed it's poetry, Missy. It's Free verse. My Poetry teacher incollege told us if we turned in any rhyming poetry for an assignment she would give us a failing grade. free verse was her thing and indicatre that rhyming was passe. Hmmm?
Good job here, too, Missy. (I have a post up now too. were you notified? Blessings. Bob
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Yes indeed it's poetry, Missy. It's Free verse. My Poetry teacher incollege told us if we turned in any rhyming poetry for an assignment she would give us a failing grade. free verse was her thing and indicatre that rhyming was passe. Hmmm?
Good job here, too, Missy. (I have a post up now too. were you notified? Blessings. Bob
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Oh yes I just read it... EXCELLENT Bob :)
Now, thank you for such an encouraging review sug.
Missy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
I love your free verse poem. That is good poetry writing straight from your heart. Face your fears girl and stand tall. Hold your head high for your writing is stupendous and beautiful. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Missy,
I love your free verse poem. That is good poetry writing straight from your heart. Face your fears girl and stand tall. Hold your head high for your writing is stupendous and beautiful. Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Big ol smooch Darlene... Love ya sug!!!
Thanks for this review.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
Aw, a very touching poem, Missy. Certainly the subject's decision isn't one that makes rational sense, but then poetry is of the feelings, even when feelings counter with reality.
Good job, my friend.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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Aw, a very touching poem, Missy. Certainly the subject's decision isn't one that makes rational sense, but then poetry is of the feelings, even when feelings counter with reality.
Good job, my friend.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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At 62, I still hope for romance and passion. Am I crazy?
Thanks Jay for the kind review hon.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a lovely free verse. You can never go wrong when speaking from the heart and this stirring in the sincerity of its delivery. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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This is a lovely free verse. You can never go wrong when speaking from the heart and this stirring in the sincerity of its delivery. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015
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I live this poem...every day. Sigh.
Thank you so much for the lovely kind review, Monica. Your encouragement means the world to me.
Always,
Missy
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HUGS .... the honesty shines through brilliantly.