Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

I can't work this one out, though I've only just got up and aren't the brightest spark at this time of the morning.

Anyway, you've obviously put lots of thought into it, and the penny will probably drop with me by mid-day. :-)

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from nor84

Excellent

I think you need to have that gun have a loud REPORT, Mikey and not a loud RETORT. Since I have to type more words to create a review, the dictionary says

noun1.Retaliation
2.A ready and sharp or witty answer
3.The art or act of retorting
4.A vessel in which substances are placed for carrying out a chemical process, typically a flask with a long bent-back neck used for distillation

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

A very good entry into the senryu poetry contest, I love the presentation of the red rose and the black background it reinforces the sadness of a lost love.

Good luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

Well I guess that's true love when one's instinct prompts him/her to leap in front and
take the bullet to save the loved one.
Good luck in the contest!


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 Comment Written 15-Aug-2015