Christine's Poems
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Comment from hannahorion
This short poem commences with a statement "work done" but we must ask the question what work. Is filling the wine glass the work referred to in "wine glass now filled" . Now the work is truly done and everyone celebrates "Here's Cheers". Again we ask are we celebrating the filling of the wine glass or the that the work is done or both. This is a clever uplifting poem in just eight words. I liked it and gave it five stars.
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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This short poem commences with a statement "work done" but we must ask the question what work. Is filling the wine glass the work referred to in "wine glass now filled" . Now the work is truly done and everyone celebrates "Here's Cheers". Again we ask are we celebrating the filling of the wine glass or the that the work is done or both. This is a clever uplifting poem in just eight words. I liked it and gave it five stars.
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Comment Written 14-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2015
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Thank you hannahorion for reading this and giving me a great rating and lovely review. I meant the day's work done nothing like a nice wine at the end of a busy day with appreciation of your time Cheers
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I should thank you. Cheers!
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Here's to raising a glass