Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery author, what a truly clever way to write a rictameter for this particular competition, your words are really inspiring and should win just for the sheer cleverness!
Good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Thank you Eric1 for your lovely words of encouragement for this rictameter, it was quite a bit of fun writing this and so glad you enjoyed this. Always ready to have a go and who knows. Appreciate you time and comments. Cheers Christine😀

reply by Eric1 on 07-Jun-2015

You are very welcome my friend

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

This is a very unique style of writing poetry indeed. And, well done, especially for a first time effort. Should be a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Thank you Brett. I really appreciate your review and hope I am making the grade. From your very first review of my work I have really enjoyed all the great work from everyone. learning all the time and yes this was a challenge but fun too. As always Cheers Christine 😀

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a cute, rictameter, mystery writer, I love it when people write a poem about the poetry type or a poem about the writer's block they are experiencing. made me smile. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Thank you sweetwoodjax . I had no idea how or what to write so it just came out like this so glad you had a smile and Cheers Christine😄

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

I think these inward-looking poems that examine the art of writing itself, have a ood record in contests. However, for a poem that specifically mentions checking the syllable count, you didn't do a very good job here! Shall I leave you to find the line that's wrong? I've gone with the five-star rating on the assumption that you will make the fairly easy fix...

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Hi kiwisteveh, for you comments and suggestions. I actually put it through syllable counter from 2 different sources and it came up correct both times, but I will go over it again and check so thanks for that always appreciate constructive feedback Cheers Christine 😊

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

This is one of the fun poems the we write out of nowhere that turn out to be amazing. You did a great job with this and I wish you all the best in the contest friend.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Thank you ExperiencingLiphe for you revies, comments and time taken to look at this. Had a bit of fun also not sure how the words get into my brain but they just seem too. That is the exciting part of writing you never know what you will come up with . Thanks and Cheers Christine😊

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Wonderfully written as well as finely composed. Flowed very smoothly. Deep and inspirational. I'm very glad that I stopped by to read this. Thank you very much for sharing this.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015

---

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2015

Wow lalajovanoski thanks for you positive review and glad you liked it. I have never tried this style before ,but was a good challenge. Thanks again Cheers Christine😀