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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from Jackarrie
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Hi James

this is so beautiful, I am sure that Brooke will just love it. You have chosen such heavenly words in this majestic poem. I cannot pick out a favourite stanza as I love the whole poem, It has to be a six.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Hi Mary,
    not only do you honor my words, you honor the intent for which the poem was composed... life's such a coin-flip, we never know what's waiting for any of us... but support, respect and love will always soften any rocky path... so let send our healing love to those who need it... and a special hit of love to an amazing woman and an inspiration to all of us who love the art of constructing magic thoughts.

    Thank you my dear sweet friend... this means a lot... yeah, the stars... but more so the sentiment... truly appreciate it!

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's
Comment from CMac2
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I loved reading this poem. So descriptive. Just when I thought there could not be any more words to describe a brooklets beauty within the darkness of the night you feed me more. A beautiful read. thank you

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hi CMac2,
    thank you for such wonderful words to accompany the generous stars your review has given me... most appreciated friend.

    with our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James.
Comment from angel123
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The best thing I like about your poem is the way it flows. It also rhymes well and your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts. Your message is beautiful and I hope Brooke gets well soon!

Angel123

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hi Angel,
    thank you for you very generous review and rating...no better way to feel that the words I compose worked their desired intention... to let Brooke know that her family here on site sends her love and healing through the art that she loves and excels in... truly appreciated.

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's.
Comment from MM lives on :)
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My brother an eloquent and supportive poem in a metaphorical dance of sorts to lift the spirits and heal the soul of a beloved member who is respected and adored by all.

7 STARS FLY ! YOU ARE THE MAN!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hey Brother,
    we're you hiding?
    You writing?

    Breathe your magic thoughts and create its form, for it is not only I who miss the brilliance you compose... I'll be waiting, stars in hand.

    Thanks for the generous review my Brother and friend... respect to you... truly appreciative of your giving-support... and your heartfelt sentiment to Brooke... Nah, you're the man!!!!!! I'm just the brother of... smile))))))))).

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your poem is full of great and vivid imagery. You did a great job expressing how much Brooke means to all of us. You explained how her presence is missed and what it means to be one of the many you wish her well and to hurry back. I like your presentation. The artwork is amazing. The colored text is great. It adds that nature touch to your words. Good job. No changes. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hi Janny,
    thank you for your generous-wonderful review and comments... most appreciated.

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's.
Comment from robina1978
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The artwork is absolutely excellent, and complements your poem very well. I loved your poem for Brooke, everybody seems to know her and wish her a speedy recovery. Nice rhyme.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hi Robina,
    yeah, it's hard for this wonderfully generous woman not to have touched everyone at some point of time...not only with her exceptional art-form, but also in the way she nurtures and gives back to all that come within her presence... whether that be in the form of reviews...or in the many classes she has been involved in on site... yes, a true giver in every sense.

    So thank you for your wonderful review... truly appreciated.

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    Jame vexes
Comment from Dutchie
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A wonderful poem and tribute to Brooke. Wonderful author notes and artwork.
A wonderful poem, this spiritual tribute to Brooke. Nice flow and beautiful rhyme, all written in the spirit of Brooke. Well chosen words make this poem a joy to read. I know she will like it as much as I do.
We all miss her and I hope she soon gets well. Great job!! Fia

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2015
    Hi Ducthie,
    your sentiment are echoed far and wide... we do miss Brooke and hope for not only her return, but a speedy and lasting recovery.

    Thank you so much for such a wonderfully generous review and rating... most appreciated.

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James.
Comment from Joy Graham
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This is a lovely message to Brooke :) I like that you called her Brooklet. That's a new twist, but a nice one.

My favorite line:

"Is to feed-protect and nurture every droplet from it's source"

She has nurtured my poetry attempts and I sure appreciate her encouragement.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Hi Joy,
    yeah, I hear what you're saying... Brooke has nurtured and coddled most of the inspiring poets on site at one time or another... her knowledge, willing to guide, teach and encourage has caused many droplets to form a river of art... and I know that you will join me in thanking Brooke for being so selfless in her sharing... not only with her reviews, advice and comments, but also through the magic she sends through the wisdom of her art.

    thank you so much for your kind review and comment... most appreciated!

    with our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Alas, once AGAIN you catch me without a &*@#! six, Sir Knight, and this is so deserving! An ELEGANT poem that flows like a dream and fills the mind with images so beautiful it brings tears to the eye - it's a journey we take as we read this, and such a wonderful tribute to Brooke - ya did good, JJ.

!***********************OUTSTANDING***********************! I was out of sixes by Monday!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Hi Dawn,
    you know six's don't really matter... there only costume jewellery... sentiment and intent are the only thing that floats my boat...and if that's boat's taken you on a journey of visual expansion to my meaning and intent, then I am please and content that my attempt to show my love and respect to Brooke has achieved its purpose... thank you, kind-sweet lady, your presence and refreshing essence recharge my energy... now if we could all just transfer that energy into the healing wishes to our friend Brooke!

    With our thoughts we create,
    healing love,
    James vx's
reply by Dawn Munro on 08-Jun-2015
    I'm without words at your selflessness, and graciousness dear friend.
Comment from jmdg1954
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James, this is a wonderful tribute to what Brooke means to us and how she impacts is individually.

Your words are strategically chosen and impact fullness.

Very creative and a poem, Brooke will cherish forever:

Take care. My friend.

John

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015
    Hi John,
    so I'll start this reply off with the gratitude it so rightly deserves... you my Brother, never fail to allow me to feel my words mean something, so thank you for that! But I also have to go on and say sorry for being so spasmodic in my reviews and late replies... I have fallen in a hole my friend... no not literally, but a real set back in my go forward with my injury... and now after another month of being stuck in that hole of hazy doubt, it's time to go forward and find the cause... time to get the appropriate scans that I'm hoping will reveal the sneaky-hidden tear of rupture that may be hindering my recovery... hell man, I was going so well... back walking... 4km a day, swimming plus all my other exercises to rebuild the muscles around the injury... and then out of the blue...BAM! Back to trying to walk a figure eight inside my house... and that comprises a eighty step circuit... so I do that until my leg go numb and I have to sit down... wish me luck friend... I'm on the hamster-wheel again... smile))))))))))).

    Thanks again Brother, you always brighten my day!

    Be well and be grateful... all else falls into place.

    With our thoughts we create,
    Healing love,
    James.