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Get Well, Brooke!

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Writing for Brooke

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Beautiful haiku. Good luck in the contest!
Format is in compliance with contest rules.
Haiku title by format
Nice presentation, beautiful picture, color background and font


 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    You are so kind. Thanks bunches.
Comment from cbat
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I have always felt sad to see dandelions mowed down.

When they turn white, a little hair spray preserves them for bouquets.

Loved your work!

 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    That is so true. Who hasn't played with them? Thank you so much.
Comment from JourneyHolm
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I feel bad for the poor little dandelions. They just want to shine like all the rest. Regardless, this was a pretty good poem. I think that it met the prompt requirements well. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you for the review. I appreciate it.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

Well, nothing but the truth in this poem.
A nice slice of purely observational poetry in this haiku.

Good luck in the competition.
GMG

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 Comment Written 31-May-2015


reply by the author on 31-May-2015
    Thank you so much.