Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Gloria ....
Hi Janny. Love your message to Brooke. Beautiful layout, photograph and the sentiment in your write is perfect.
I await for Brooke's return, so that her beauty can unfold and shower over us once again.
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Hi Janny. Love your message to Brooke. Beautiful layout, photograph and the sentiment in your write is perfect.
I await for Brooke's return, so that her beauty can unfold and shower over us once again.
Gloria
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I agree. You are so right. Thanks for stopping to read & review my poem. Jan
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Nice triolet and tribute to your friend Brooke. I like the format of your poem, nice colors and picture.
One of the lines is out of place, it should be easy to fix.
Good job!!
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Nice triolet and tribute to your friend Brooke. I like the format of your poem, nice colors and picture.
One of the lines is out of place, it should be easy to fix.
Good job!!
Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you so much. I will look again. Jan
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This is a new format for me. Please elaborate as to which line you are speaking of. Thanks, Jan
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the darkness before the sunrise
hides the beauty that will unfold
as the light reflects to your eyes
and reveals your amazing prize
nothing is hidden in disguise
so take that first step and be bold
the darkness before the sunrise
hides the beauty that will unfold
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I do not see any change
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Ok, I think I got it. Jan
Comment from patcelaw
Jan, this is a lovely triolet poem for Brooke, I do hope she is getting better each day. Blessings for a nice Sunday, Patricia
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reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Jan, this is a lovely triolet poem for Brooke, I do hope she is getting better each day. Blessings for a nice Sunday, Patricia
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Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you, Pat. I really appreciate your time. Jan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, jannypan, you did an excellent job writing this triolet for brooke. she always tried to teach me that form but never succeeded lol. I am glad her beauty will never be covered by darkness because her light always shines through
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this is an excellent write, jannypan, you did an excellent job writing this triolet for brooke. she always tried to teach me that form but never succeeded lol. I am glad her beauty will never be covered by darkness because her light always shines through
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Comment Written 31-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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I appreciate your time. It means a great deal to me. Thank you so much for reading & reviewing. Jan