Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Jackarrie
This is a beautiful presented tribute, with lovely glittery words that spell out a sincere message. We all got to know every antic of Sawyer through the eyes of a loving Grandmother. We hope to have Brooke back with us and continuing with her great entries on FS, where she is loved so much.
Great addition to all the other tributes.
Mary
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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This is a beautiful presented tribute, with lovely glittery words that spell out a sincere message. We all got to know every antic of Sawyer through the eyes of a loving Grandmother. We hope to have Brooke back with us and continuing with her great entries on FS, where she is loved so much.
Great addition to all the other tributes.
Mary
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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HI Mary, thank you so much sweetie...I do miss her...I hope she gets back soon too...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from angel123
Your poem is beautifully written, warm and heartfelt. I enjoyed reading it and I hope Brooke gets well. I do not know her, but it seems a lot of Fanstory writer's do. Your poem flows and rhymes well and artwork choice is great!
Angel123
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Your poem is beautifully written, warm and heartfelt. I enjoyed reading it and I hope Brooke gets well. I do not know her, but it seems a lot of Fanstory writer's do. Your poem flows and rhymes well and artwork choice is great!
Angel123
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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HI Angel, she is a wonderful part of our FanStory family...she is our teacher in more then one way...teaches poetry...and the love of life...and nature...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from LIJ Red
Well stated salute to Brooke, voicing the sentiments of most of the Fanstory
group-all that knew her. The rhymes are just enough to spice the free verse.
Excellent.
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Well stated salute to Brooke, voicing the sentiments of most of the Fanstory
group-all that knew her. The rhymes are just enough to spice the free verse.
Excellent.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hi LIJ, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...I really miss her...wish she would find her way back to us...sigh...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Jacob Collins
I too hope that Brooke will get well soon, through all the poems I've read over the last couple of days I can see that she is very much loved on Fanstory, I hope that it shan't be long before we see her back again.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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I too hope that Brooke will get well soon, through all the poems I've read over the last couple of days I can see that she is very much loved on Fanstory, I hope that it shan't be long before we see her back again.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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HI Jacob, she is truly loved on FanStory...she is our teacher...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Megalips
Really nice dedication to Brook and I know she will love the glitter words...you realize that it gives someone inspiration to talk to them about their grandkids! So this is beautiful and encouraging...a healing touch
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Really nice dedication to Brook and I know she will love the glitter words...you realize that it gives someone inspiration to talk to them about their grandkids! So this is beautiful and encouraging...a healing touch
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
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thank you so very much...I wish she would come back soon...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Joan E.
I was pleased to see your name pop up when I arrived home. Thank you for your tribute to Brooke--she has taught us all to see the beauty in Dandelions and allowed us to watch Sawyer become a little boy. My mother was diagnosed with MS late in life and lived with the disease for almost 20 years. Let's hope Brooke does as well. I enjoyed your rhymed tercets and your title says it all! Hugs- Joan
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I was pleased to see your name pop up when I arrived home. Thank you for your tribute to Brooke--she has taught us all to see the beauty in Dandelions and allowed us to watch Sawyer become a little boy. My mother was diagnosed with MS late in life and lived with the disease for almost 20 years. Let's hope Brooke does as well. I enjoyed your rhymed tercets and your title says it all! Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hi Sweetness, I know Maureen has had it for years...so I hope they can get it under control for her...and she can come back to us...I sure miss her...she our teacher in poetry, in life and in nature...sigh...I am glad you are home safe...and hope it was a wonderful trip...now put the brakes on and rest...big hugs back at ya...love ya Linda xxoo
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Thanks for thinking about me--it was a good trip and I am trying to pace myself and hope to post a poem-card tonight.
My mom died in 1994 and I thought by now modern medicine would have made more progress with the disease. We can only hope for a miracle for Brooke and Maureen. More hugs- Joan
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I am so sorry about your mother Joan...Maureen came back for awhile...I wish Brooke would...sigh...and I always think about you...I'm seeing the world through your eyes...and smiling big...love ya you...Linda xxoo
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You are a sweetheart. I am thrilled that you can see the world through my eyes--how wonderful that my poem-cards can capture what I observe. I think of you too and hope you are taking good care of yourself. As with our friends, my mother was a fighter and she proved that life is worth living even with severe impairments. I'm thinking positive thoughts about Maureen and Brooke. More hugs- Joan
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that's the only way I can see the world with you...you keep forgetting to pick me up on the corner ...LOL...have you ever been left on a corner with Michael...LOL...like you I am thinking positive about Maureen and Brooke...just wish they would get back here...sigh...big hugs...Linda xxoo
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I've shared banter with Michael, which is rather like being left on a corner with him. LOL Here's to more armchair traveling with you and some good news about Brooke and Maureen! -J
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LMAO you...well you know him well...too funny...here's to a...have a great evening you...sweet dreams...and I well pray for good news on our ladies...hugs you
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See you and your prayers in my dreams! -J
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sounds like a plan...love...xxoo
Comment from Glasstruth
Another wonderful tribute to Brooke. All that I've read are different and unique as this one is. A great get well poem. Enjoyed immensely. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Another wonderful tribute to Brooke. All that I've read are different and unique as this one is. A great get well poem. Enjoyed immensely. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hi Les, I have read some beautiful poems and letters to her...I know she is happy...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, linda, you did an excellent job writing this sweet poem about brooke's presence on the website and in the world. we all pray she can make it back.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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this is an excellent write, linda, you did an excellent job writing this sweet poem about brooke's presence on the website and in the world. we all pray she can make it back.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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HI Pam, thank you so very much....I hope and pray she we return soon...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from JourneyHolm
This is a lovely ode to Brooke. I think the poem got progressively better during the second half. When you said, "you took a weed", I thought it would follow with something like "and made a flower". This part was a bit confusing for me. Regardless, I enjoyed your writing. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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This is a lovely ode to Brooke. I think the poem got progressively better during the second half. When you said, "you took a weed", I thought it would follow with something like "and made a flower". This part was a bit confusing for me. Regardless, I enjoyed your writing. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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it was already a flower...because it is a weed...does not mean it isn't beautiful...Brooke showed me that...she made it a Rose...sorry it confused you...Linda xxoo
Comment from c_lucas
One of the difficulties with FanStory is that it heavy on middle aged and seniors. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to Brooke. I like the glittering image.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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One of the difficulties with FanStory is that it heavy on middle aged and seniors. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to Brooke. I like the glittering image.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2015
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Hi Charlie, you are so right...yes it is...I am so glad you like this...and hope Brooke will be back soon...sigh...thank you so very much...Luff Linda xxoo
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You're welcome, Linda. Charlie