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Comment from TAB_that's me
Well, certainly interesting story line and pretty creepy too. Well written Bill. I didn't find any spag in it.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Well, certainly interesting story line and pretty creepy too. Well written Bill. I didn't find any spag in it.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, Teresa, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from dmt1967
The way kids think. The dad sounds a right piece of work, and the mum sounds like an angel. The kid, though, prefers the dad as he is 'more fun.' I like the writing, and thank you for sharing.
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The way kids think. The dad sounds a right piece of work, and the mum sounds like an angel. The kid, though, prefers the dad as he is 'more fun.' I like the writing, and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Eric1
LOL Bill, I know i shouldn't really but hey, I needed a bit of cheering up and your wonderful compilation did the trick for me my friend, thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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LOL Bill, I know i shouldn't really but hey, I needed a bit of cheering up and your wonderful compilation did the trick for me my friend, thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, Eric, for the excellent review. Bill
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Guess mom had better make double dang sure she keeps Billy away from his daddy. Like the idea of a speed bump. That one is funny to my twisted sense of humor.
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Guess mom had better make double dang sure she keeps Billy away from his daddy. Like the idea of a speed bump. That one is funny to my twisted sense of humor.
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Comment Written 04-May-2015
reply by the author on 04-May-2015
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Thank you, Brett, for the excellent review. Bill