Dogs in Heaven.
A very short poem with rhyme31 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
handsome presentation of your poem
good use of rhyming couplets
nice visuals of Heaven and its canine inhabitants
good humor in the reveal of the final line
:-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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handsome presentation of your poem
good use of rhyming couplets
nice visuals of Heaven and its canine inhabitants
good humor in the reveal of the final line
:-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a lovely little whimsical piece. I like the imagery and the picture you give of a dog heaven. The last line is pretty funny too. Nicely done
GMG
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Hi there,
This is a lovely little whimsical piece. I like the imagery and the picture you give of a dog heaven. The last line is pretty funny too. Nicely done
GMG
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Funny, I just reviewed your story.
Comment from krys123
Ine;
+ Picture is outstanding and is very relative, appropriate, reflective and complementary to your poem.
+ Imagery is very demonstratively expressive and vividly descriptive as it visualizes heaven for dogs very well.
+ The rhyming words are neither forced nor labored and contingent to the concept of each line which is very important because it also helps with the rhythmic flow of the poem;
+ rhythmic meter(Intermittent syllable count per line), cadence, timing and tempo all were helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
+ Poetic assessment: I very much enjoyed this as it was also quite humorous when you mentioned that in dog heaven cats are not allowed or aren't there. Also the writing was done very well and I enjoyed the poem very much.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my dear friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Ine;
+ Picture is outstanding and is very relative, appropriate, reflective and complementary to your poem.
+ Imagery is very demonstratively expressive and vividly descriptive as it visualizes heaven for dogs very well.
+ The rhyming words are neither forced nor labored and contingent to the concept of each line which is very important because it also helps with the rhythmic flow of the poem;
+ rhythmic meter(Intermittent syllable count per line), cadence, timing and tempo all were helpful in making the reading clear, fluid and easy.
+ Poetic assessment: I very much enjoyed this as it was also quite humorous when you mentioned that in dog heaven cats are not allowed or aren't there. Also the writing was done very well and I enjoyed the poem very much.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always my dear friend.
Alex
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Thanks for the praise, Alex.
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You are so welcome
Comment from Glasstruth
A wonderfully pleasant poem, but I have to disagree about heaven being a delight because there's no cats. My first dog was best friends with my cat back then. They used to chase each other around for fun. Nice rhyming. Reads well. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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A wonderfully pleasant poem, but I have to disagree about heaven being a delight because there's no cats. My first dog was best friends with my cat back then. They used to chase each other around for fun. Nice rhyming. Reads well. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. We had too, but cats go to cats Heaven.
Comment from Joan E.
I did not expect your clever punchline, and was pleased that you answered your question! I also enjoyed your rhymed quatrain and striking artwork. Many cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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I did not expect your clever punchline, and was pleased that you answered your question! I also enjoyed your rhymed quatrain and striking artwork. Many cheers- Joan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I LOVE dogs. Your poem is great (and a bit funny). Yes, all dogs go to Heaven. Do you know Rainbow Bridge? Google it if not. It is great. No changes. Thanks for sharing. No changes needed.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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I LOVE dogs. Your poem is great (and a bit funny). Yes, all dogs go to Heaven. Do you know Rainbow Bridge? Google it if not. It is great. No changes. Thanks for sharing. No changes needed.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Yes, I do know Rainbow Bridge.
Comment from Deborah Marie
Virtual six! Gives hope even to me. I'm going to share this with my daughter. She's frightened because our dog is 14 years old... We all need poems like this; to keep us positive about our pet's death and all... Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Virtual six! Gives hope even to me. I'm going to share this with my daughter. She's frightened because our dog is 14 years old... We all need poems like this; to keep us positive about our pet's death and all... Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming. God Bless, Deb
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Thanks very much for the virtual six.
Comment from Ronni
Cute and witty poem on dogs in heaven....free of cats at last...LOL...
Quite an imagination here and fun way to put it all together. Great
Pic too.....thanks for sharing....Blessings, Ronni
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Cute and witty poem on dogs in heaven....free of cats at last...LOL...
Quite an imagination here and fun way to put it all together. Great
Pic too.....thanks for sharing....Blessings, Ronni
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wait, wait, wait, I am a cat lover and there has to be at least one in Heaven for me.
Nice piece.
Flow and meter are spot on.
Rhyme and rhythm are great.
Very well done...except for the lack of cats.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Wait, wait, wait, I am a cat lover and there has to be at least one in Heaven for me.
Nice piece.
Flow and meter are spot on.
Rhyme and rhythm are great.
Very well done...except for the lack of cats.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. Cats go to cat's Heaven.
Comment from Ben Colder
Hard to say, but I have two cats that love my dog. They get along fine. Not sure about dogs in heaven would be nice though. I miss the one I had. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Hard to say, but I have two cats that love my dog. They get along fine. Not sure about dogs in heaven would be nice though. I miss the one I had. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a great weekend. We used to have both and they loved each other.