Comment from amada

Excellent

I enjoyed very much this story about your cat going out at night to the square behind the butcher shop. Cute! Very cute and amazing. Thank you for keeping us entertained.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Poor cats, I guess they don't have many fans at nights. still, they are welcomed when they purr.

''When Dozy arrived at the square, he searches for a good place at the wall''

Either change ''arrived'' to 'arrives'= present or change ''searches''to searched' so that you keep that sentence in one tense.

Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks for the excellent tip.

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Each summer night it id[is] the same,Typo
No people don't but anytime it is mating
season listen for it. They serenade each
other quite loud. Cute story. Ine. Nancy

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

Comment from nelliesellie

Exceptional

Very few humans appreciate cats in the way they appreciate themselves. I hope the cats do not give the butcher's shoe back to him. They can at least pee in it. I love the picture. I love the story. I do not like the singing of cats. Great work.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week. Thanks ever so much for the great six.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Some people just don't appreciate good music. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
ERROR
'Each summer night it id (IS) the same,

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a lovely week.

reply by c_lucas on 16-Mar-2015

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Maybe it was the cat's fault, poor choice of songs!
I'm not fond of their usual songs specially at night.
This was cute my friend. You certainly an excellent
imagination.
Have a wonderful Sunday.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice Sunday. LOL

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

A light hearted funyy little story about the night life of some cats. the concert seems to be annoying to some but even cats are entitled to some fun. I found the there was much repetition of the word night.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice Sunday.

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahaha! G'day Ine. I really enjoyed this funny little story mate. I could see the cats all sitting and clapping LOL. I must admit I don't like the sound of screaming cats either. Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice Sunday. I agree it is not nice.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh the poor dear cats, why can't they be allowed to hold a concert every night if they really want to, that's only fair! I loved this well written short excerpt on the local cat's choir, I must admit I'm not overly fond of it myself, well done Ile, blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice Sunday. Neither am I.

reply by royowen on 15-Mar-2015

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Ine. Off to a nice start with this little cat story. Suggest re-writing some portions because there is much repetition of words, especially "night" and "song." You can easily streamline for the reader and make your tale more interesting if you fix this problem. I know you can do that. Best, Marilyn

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2015

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a nice Sunday.