Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "senryu (easy to I.D.)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from boxergirl
I had never thought of the dust angle and identifying a thief. I thank you for giving me another good excuse to put off my dusting. 8-)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I had never thought of the dust angle and identifying a thief. I thank you for giving me another good excuse to put off my dusting. 8-)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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That's what I say. L0L
Comment from Shirley B
Oh How I love this litte ditty. Not only did the thief take it but she told on herself. Good luck keeping up with things like that if you live in dusty Oklahoma like I do! Great job, Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Oh How I love this litte ditty. Not only did the thief take it but she told on herself. Good luck keeping up with things like that if you live in dusty Oklahoma like I do! Great job, Shirley
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I don't even try to keep up with it. Then again, maybe it's the reason for my allergies. Sigh...
Comment from gypsycaravan
This brought back bad memories for me. Ex husband wrote "dust me" on every piece of furniture with dust. Didn't matter that I had 5 kids all a year apart in age to care for. Your comparison to ID for thieves to be caught was excellent/
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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This brought back bad memories for me. Ex husband wrote "dust me" on every piece of furniture with dust. Didn't matter that I had 5 kids all a year apart in age to care for. Your comparison to ID for thieves to be caught was excellent/
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Whoops! Almost posted a picture that said that. Small wonder he's your ex!
Comment from Sasha
Some criminals just don't have what it takes to be a success. This is very clever and gave me a hearty laugh...I have learned to put my coffee down before reading your posts.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Some criminals just don't have what it takes to be a success. This is very clever and gave me a hearty laugh...I have learned to put my coffee down before reading your posts.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Thanks, sasha. As you can note I forget to dust. It is fun to write in it though.
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Shari.
Thieves are not only dishonest, but sneaky. You've shown in this humourous poem, some lack intelligence to hide their identity.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Hi, Shari.
Thieves are not only dishonest, but sneaky. You've shown in this humourous poem, some lack intelligence to hide their identity.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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That's the intent. Thanks, Rosalyne.
Comment from Dean Kuch
What a dunderhead! First, it's not too bright to steal in the first place, okay? But then, to write your name in the dust of the stolen furniture?!? Well, let's be nice and just surmise that they were probably never the sharpest tool in the toolbox, LOL...
Good stuff, Spit, hah-hah!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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What a dunderhead! First, it's not too bright to steal in the first place, okay? But then, to write your name in the dust of the stolen furniture?!? Well, let's be nice and just surmise that they were probably never the sharpest tool in the toolbox, LOL...
Good stuff, Spit, hah-hah!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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That's why they end up in jail. :-)
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:}...
Comment from kiwijenny
It's like the guy who broke in to a house killed the owner and googled..HOW TO DISPOSE OF A DEAD BODY...he was arrested and convicted in short order.
I like this but the chin hair and mirror was even better lol
God bless.
Ps my interview with the agent went very badly. The info on pitching was no use here because our convention was set up differently. She had my first chapters and critiqued them. She did not like my character said she did nothing! Yikes. Her bio had said she does not like fantasy about dragons. Told me to read more current middle grade books because I was not current
I will get my revenge I will write her into my book as a Witch.
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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It's like the guy who broke in to a house killed the owner and googled..HOW TO DISPOSE OF A DEAD BODY...he was arrested and convicted in short order.
I like this but the chin hair and mirror was even better lol
God bless.
Ps my interview with the agent went very badly. The info on pitching was no use here because our convention was set up differently. She had my first chapters and critiqued them. She did not like my character said she did nothing! Yikes. Her bio had said she does not like fantasy about dragons. Told me to read more current middle grade books because I was not current
I will get my revenge I will write her into my book as a Witch.
God bless
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Is that true about that the killer who googled?
Sorry to hear the interview didn't go well. Considerate a learning experience. Hope you'll followed my next script "The Wannabe Writer" based on truth when Charlie asked me to critique his manuscript. Yeap, I tore it apart. But his friends loved it.
Comment from Domino 2
I can't see my dust beneath the cigarette ash, Shari. :-)
At least these 'finger prints' have a nice name for a thief. :-)
Happy Sunday, Ray xx
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I can't see my dust beneath the cigarette ash, Shari. :-)
At least these 'finger prints' have a nice name for a thief. :-)
Happy Sunday, Ray xx
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I can't see my dust beneath the cat hairs. Not funny. But I don't have the heart to evict her.
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Lol...these guys would have to wear dusk protection suit s in my house, thanks for the smile. I'm away and computer time is limited,so no may be slow to respond. Padumachitta
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Hi. Lol...these guys would have to wear dusk protection suit s in my house, thanks for the smile. I'm away and computer time is limited,so no may be slow to respond. Padumachitta
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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Some days I don't even turn on the PC until two or three. All those pesky errands that have to done. Housekeeping not included. Thank goodness for my robotic vacuum cleaner.
Comment from kiwisteveh
I think we've all seen plenty of examples of stupid thieves - your poem presents us with another.
Of course it could have been a very clever thief writing someone else's name....
Steve
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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I think we've all seen plenty of examples of stupid thieves - your poem presents us with another.
Of course it could have been a very clever thief writing someone else's name....
Steve
Comment Written 26-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2014
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That's a good idea for my next heist. :-)