Catawampus
Cat befriending a dog.22 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You meet the contest requirements nicely with this well penned piece. This is a delightful read even if a "C"atastrophe for the unwitting canine. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
  |
You meet the contest requirements nicely with this well penned piece. This is a delightful read even if a "C"atastrophe for the unwitting canine. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you as always Mystic, I love all of your reviews as well as the stars you have given me now and in the past. God Bless!
Comment from TAB_that's me
YOu did a great job with this prompt even though I don't care for the style. I wish you well in the contest.
~~~~teresa~~~~
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
YOu did a great job with this prompt even though I don't care for the style. I wish you well in the contest.
~~~~teresa~~~~
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you Teresa for the great stars and review and certainly for the well wishes. God Bless!
Comment from Trybuck
Another excellent entry in this contest. The picture is too cute. Dogs, cats and babies are hard to beat in contest. Well done with your entry, Buck
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
Another excellent entry in this contest. The picture is too cute. Dogs, cats and babies are hard to beat in contest. Well done with your entry, Buck
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you Buck for the awesome review and generous stars, this is my first attempt at such writing and I have to admit it was fun. God bless!
Comment from ravenblack
Needless to say, great alliteration in celebration of cat antics. I really like your use of catawampus. Just not sure about caddy cornered. I know it does not carry the same sense, but what about kitty-cornered?
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
Needless to say, great alliteration in celebration of cat antics. I really like your use of catawampus. Just not sure about caddy cornered. I know it does not carry the same sense, but what about kitty-cornered?
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you raven once more for the awesome review and stars, I could not use Kitty but I did change it so Catty cornered. Hopefully that will work it actually sounds better. Thank you again and God Bless! Oh man! I could have used catapulted, what do you think?
-
That would be catastrophic.
Comment from kiwijenny
What a fine caterwaul caper...casual canine cat-napping cat
I love the alliteration and the title catawampus
Is it caddy cornered or catty cornered?
God bless
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
What a fine caterwaul caper...casual canine cat-napping cat
I love the alliteration and the title catawampus
Is it caddy cornered or catty cornered?
God bless
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you Jenny for the awesome review and stars, I think I might just have to edit caddy to catty cornered, I like that better! God bless!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a delightful Alliteration Celebration poem for the contest. You have chosen the perfect picture. I never think of a cat as clumsy - on the contrary they are extremely nimble, but with the restriction of alliteration in every word you have made a terrific attempt at this. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
This is a delightful Alliteration Celebration poem for the contest. You have chosen the perfect picture. I never think of a cat as clumsy - on the contrary they are extremely nimble, but with the restriction of alliteration in every word you have made a terrific attempt at this. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you Dorothy for the awesome review and stars, I once had a cat who was not so nimble his name was Max, other than that I have never seen a clumsy cat either. God Bless!
Comment from mfowler
It took a moment to realise what you were achieving here. I then saw the challenge and realised that you'd just written a sweet and interesting free verse about a cat using only the letter 'c' for starters. Fun poem full of mischief and action. Well done. Good luck.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
It took a moment to realise what you were achieving here. I then saw the challenge and realised that you'd just written a sweet and interesting free verse about a cat using only the letter 'c' for starters. Fun poem full of mischief and action. Well done. Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you mfowler for another awesome review and fine stars. God Bless!
Comment from trimple
Hello there
You have adhered to the prompts rules and regs superbly.
Love the name Catawampus!
Great pic too..
Difficult challenge to get right, but you have tackled this well. Good luck
kind regards
tripmple
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
Hello there
You have adhered to the prompts rules and regs superbly.
Love the name Catawampus!
Great pic too..
Difficult challenge to get right, but you have tackled this well. Good luck
kind regards
tripmple
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you trimple for the awesome review and kind stars, I enjoyed writing this as it was my first attempt at such a difficult piece. God bless!
-
You're welcome:)
Comment from Jackarrie
I love this poem with all of C's beginning every line. The Image is so cute and the poem does it justice in observation. producing a great entry into this contest.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
I love this poem with all of C's beginning every line. The Image is so cute and the poem does it justice in observation. producing a great entry into this contest.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
thank you Mary, your awesome reviews and stars are always welcomed with great appreciation. God Bless!
Comment from linsbm
Cat befriending a dog is quite a rare happening in the life of domesticated pets. It catches attention and subject of interest to readers. The accompanying photo is a rare shot of rare company that creates a family feel. The whole scenario reflects a sense of belonging which this poem speaks of. As per contest rule and requirements - this poem meets the requirement- alliteration in letter 'c'. Good read and enjoyable. Excellent. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
|
Cat befriending a dog is quite a rare happening in the life of domesticated pets. It catches attention and subject of interest to readers. The accompanying photo is a rare shot of rare company that creates a family feel. The whole scenario reflects a sense of belonging which this poem speaks of. As per contest rule and requirements - this poem meets the requirement- alliteration in letter 'c'. Good read and enjoyable. Excellent. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
-
Thank you Lin for the awesome review and fine stars, I found this to be quite the challenge at first and then it came at me fast. God Bless!