Halloween Stew
Let's see, three table spoons of chopped bat wing20 total reviews
Comment from Pegcook
I couldn't stop laughing when I read this one! And am still laughing! Great twist on "eye of newt, wings of bat, etc etc etc! Love it!
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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I couldn't stop laughing when I read this one! And am still laughing! Great twist on "eye of newt, wings of bat, etc etc etc! Love it!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Pegcook. So glad it brightened your day.
Comment from Judy Couch
This is cute. The picture compliments it perfectly and helps to spark the imagination. I wonder what's in the stew. What kind of meat does it contain that requires catsup?
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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This is cute. The picture compliments it perfectly and helps to spark the imagination. I wonder what's in the stew. What kind of meat does it contain that requires catsup?
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Judy.
Comment from seaglass
Well, of course. Everything needs Catsup. This is a timely subject for the coming month. Good use of the few allowed words to paint a brief picture. Great match with graphics.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Well, of course. Everything needs Catsup. This is a timely subject for the coming month. Good use of the few allowed words to paint a brief picture. Great match with graphics.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, seaglass.
Comment from Charlene0513
A very hideous sight portrayed as no one wants to be the next victim.
Noticed alliteration- Only
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Charlene
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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A very hideous sight portrayed as no one wants to be the next victim.
Noticed alliteration- Only
One
Charlene
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Charlene.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Hey, isn't catsup a staple in everyone's home? I couldn't survive it if I had to eat a burger or hot dot and fries without it. Whew!
Great presentation. The best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Hi,
Hey, isn't catsup a staple in everyone's home? I couldn't survive it if I had to eat a burger or hot dot and fries without it. Whew!
Great presentation. The best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Jax.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, ketchup makes everything taste better, but I'm sure the witches won't eat anything with their cats in it, lol. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, ketchup makes everything taste better, but I'm sure the witches won't eat anything with their cats in it, lol. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Neonewman
I love this 2-4-2 writing prompt, you captivated Halloween and witches my two favorite things and it was funny, I mean catsup, really LOL. Good luck in the contest and God Bless!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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I love this 2-4-2 writing prompt, you captivated Halloween and witches my two favorite things and it was funny, I mean catsup, really LOL. Good luck in the contest and God Bless!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Your syllable count meets the contest requirements perfectly. This is a really fun play on words and quite timely - well, for everyone but the cat. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Your syllable count meets the contest requirements perfectly. This is a really fun play on words and quite timely - well, for everyone but the cat. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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thank you Mystic.
Comment from adewpearl
good pairing of artwork and poem, which is in good 2/4/2 syllable count for the contest
good assonance of short I sounds in thing's missing
a cute commentary on the nature of witch's brew :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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good pairing of artwork and poem, which is in good 2/4/2 syllable count for the contest
good assonance of short I sounds in thing's missing
a cute commentary on the nature of witch's brew :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Brooke. And congrats on your poetry win.
Comment from CR Delport
Halloween is still a month away, and although not as big here in South Africa, it is getting bigger :) This is well done. Good luck.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Halloween is still a month away, and although not as big here in South Africa, it is getting bigger :) This is well done. Good luck.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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thank you, CR.