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The Shadow of 9/11

anniversary--again

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Comment from kiwijenny
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This is a very well penned treatise ..I don't understand politics very much but I love your image of the shark sharpening his teeth while only a fin is showing....that I can understand.thank you...
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much for the read. You don't need to understand danger to feel the threat.
Comment from Writingfundimension
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A beautifully written and thoughtful essay, SO. I've often thought how difficult it would be to in Palestine or any area, including Belfast, when terrorism is rampant. You've expressed my own sentiments with your final paragraph. Warm regards, Bev

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much. Enjoy your visit to TO.
reply by Writingfundimension on 13-Sep-2014
    Thank you, I am really looking forward to it!

    :) Bev
Comment from Dawn Munro
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First, one small nit - "...the events of that September morning(,)<< I don't think a comma is needed here.

As usual, this is fabulous commentary, and resonates with me immensely - even your statement that you are not bound to one sect and prefer to label yourself as spiritual (me too).

I loved the metaphor of the shark too - I don't think there could be a better description of the turmoil and danger I believe lurks below the surface globally anymore...

I'm out of sixes, and yet again, can't reflect the rating this essay so deserves.

OUTSTANDING! *********************

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much.
reply by Dawn Munro on 13-Sep-2014
    You're very welcome.
Comment from LOA7
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It's sad that, although Bin Laden is gone, there are people who want to kill us. And we still have to deal with it. It's going to take a strong plan and strong people to see it through. Hopefully soon. Thanks for writing.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    I appreciate your read and comments.
Comment from dreamin'
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A perfectly written essay. Too bad you can only get six stars. I'd give all six of mine, if I could.

"Osama was only the visible fin above the water. Below the surface, the shark began to twitch, gnash and sharpen his teeth." Great analogy for something so sinister, and mostly invisible.

"I can't ignore the breeding hatred that is now recruiting our own children to a radical faith that supports violence. Without question, I am involved in this war."

How does one fight against a group that has turned the ultimate sacrifice in any war, into the ultimate weapon? It's the total disregard for human life that scares the hell out of me.

Great message, superb writing, thank you.

Debbie

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Your generosity is humbling, thank you so much.
Comment from ravenblack
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I am with you. Islamic State is the most terrifying embodiment of hatred that we have seen in modern history- and some of our own citizens have joined their cause-less cause, a bunch of nihilists playing out deadly fantasies on the world stage. Hopefully we won't go this one alone, that our the coalition of Islamic allies will hold.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    People hide behind causes, but anyone who believes a life is a cheap commodity can't really appreciate any God.
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Spiritual Echo. I agree wholeheartedly with what you have said so eloquently. I pray for peace throughout the world but it's very unlikely.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Yes, very unlikely, but prayers are never wasted.
Comment from lindalcreel
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Many of us still have memories of that fateful day, and like you our lives were changed. The one thing I remember was praying that I was so glad my family was together. It didn't matter what else came down the pike as long as we could support each other in the worst circumstances.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
reply by lindalcreel on 14-Sep-2014
    My pleasure:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I, one of many in this country, will never forget their names, Spiritual Echo, nor the atrocities this Islamic extremist faction perpetrated upon my homeland and fellow innocent citizens.

The hijackers in the September 11 attacks were 19 men, all of them affiliated with al-Qaeda, and 15 of the 19 were citizens of Saudi Arabia. Two others were from the United Arab Emirates, Egypt and Lebanon. The hijackers were organized into four teams, each led by a pilot-trained hijacker with three or four "muscle hijackers" who were trained to help subdue the pilots, passengers, and crew.

The first hijackers to arrive in the United States were Khalid al-Mihdhar and Nawaf al-Hazmi, who settled in the San Diego area in January 2000. They were followed by three hijacker-pilots, Mohamed Atta, Marwan al-Shehhi, and Ziad Jarrah mid-2000 to undertake flight training in south Florida. The fourth hijacker-pilot, Hani Hanjour, arrived in San Diego in December 2000. The rest of the "muscle hijackers" arrived in early and mid-2001.

Khalid al-Mihdhar and Nawaf al-Hazmi were both experienced and respected jihadists in the eyes of al-Qaeda leader, Osama bin Laden. Mihdhar and Hazmi both had prior experience fighting in Bosnia, and had trained during the 1990s at camps in Afghanistan. When Bin Laden committed to the September 11 attacks plot idea, he assigned both Mihdhar and Hazmi to the plot. Both were so eager to participate in operations within the United States, that they obtained visas in April 1999. Once selected, Mihdhar and Hazmi were sent to the Mes Aynak training camp in Afghanistan. In late 1999, Hazmi, Attash, and Yemeni went to Karachi, Pakistan to see Mohammed, who instructed them on Western culture and travel; however, Mihdhar did not go to Karachi, instead returning to Yemen.

Unfortunately, we have no guarantees that something like the horrendous acts these men carried out will never happen on our shores again. With the advent of smaller, more powerful nuclear weapons that can easily fit into a briefcase, I fear that unless this vermin is eradicated from the face of the earth, it is just a matter of time...

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    When the atom bomb was dropped on Hiroshima, the world was awed into silence and as horrific as it may sound, perhaps humanity needs to be reminded of it's lethal, growing intelligence.

    You have humbled me with your very insightful and detailed response. ingrid
reply by Dean Kuch on 13-Sep-2014
    It is a topic very close and dear to my heart, Ingrid. You are very welcome, my friend. :}
Comment from onebrit
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It is certainly true that religion is the cause of more hatred, persecution and war than any other cause which I have always found strange. The world is changing so fast, it's becoming so scary. Like you I hope for compassion, respect for our differences and the possibility that we can all live together. My heart hopes this, my mind doubts it. Good, insightful, well written piece.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    When hatred reigns, religion is as good an excuse as any other. Thanks for reading.