Play Me
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Comment from Kingsland
I'm not a big fan of romantic poetry, as I find most of it written with roses hearts and flowers that just reek of things we've all heard before. But this has none of that in its poetic verve. It is written with thoughts that are original and resonate from the heart of the poet. When in writing, you first write with your heart. Then you rewrite with your mind. This is an excellently written piece of romantic poetry that I enjoyed reading... John
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I'm not a big fan of romantic poetry, as I find most of it written with roses hearts and flowers that just reek of things we've all heard before. But this has none of that in its poetic verve. It is written with thoughts that are original and resonate from the heart of the poet. When in writing, you first write with your heart. Then you rewrite with your mind. This is an excellently written piece of romantic poetry that I enjoyed reading... John
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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John, how are you? thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! Jimi
Comment from Liisa
I listened and watched ( what a good looking man! ) and read your poem. I am familiar with musical words as I play a few instruments myself. Your poem is very well written, very sensual and I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I listened and watched ( what a good looking man! ) and read your poem. I am familiar with musical words as I play a few instruments myself. Your poem is very well written, very sensual and I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Liisa,thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! jls
Comment from amada
Beautiful lines embracing the world and the passion of music. Such a creative piece full of passion and metaphors. Lovely to read, to listen and to dream.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Beautiful lines embracing the world and the passion of music. Such a creative piece full of passion and metaphors. Lovely to read, to listen and to dream.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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amada, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! jls
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is one of the best poems I've read and enjoyed in a very long time. Spectacular wording with the musical terms and a beautiful presentation. I wish I could give it a seven. A most outstanding write, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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This is one of the best poems I've read and enjoyed in a very long time. Spectacular wording with the musical terms and a beautiful presentation. I wish I could give it a seven. A most outstanding write, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Debbie, once again a huge thank you! Oh yes, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! jls
Comment from pearlecat
This is my favorite poem in this trilogy. The passion and desires play out nicely. So many beautiful lines. Loved the accompanied music. Really awesome to read while listening to the music. Have you seen the movie called the 'Red violin'? Excellent movie and sound track. This reminded me of it. An easy sixer! Pearl
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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This is my favorite poem in this trilogy. The passion and desires play out nicely. So many beautiful lines. Loved the accompanied music. Really awesome to read while listening to the music. Have you seen the movie called the 'Red violin'? Excellent movie and sound track. This reminded me of it. An easy sixer! Pearl
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Pearle, another huge thank you sweet friend and I do apologize for the delay in expressing my sincere appreciation.. Jimi
No I have not seen the Red Violin, I will have to look into it..
Comment from royowen
I am actually a musician, so I would think these metaphorical terms to apply to probably a a violin, and you would probably play it in all these musical expressions more likely than another instrument, if you were to turn a body into a violin and play it this way, you would drive someone wild! I loved the write, but I don't want to read it again! It puts a whole new dimension on romance! Well written, expressive descriptions, cleverly designed and composed. Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I am actually a musician, so I would think these metaphorical terms to apply to probably a a violin, and you would probably play it in all these musical expressions more likely than another instrument, if you were to turn a body into a violin and play it this way, you would drive someone wild! I loved the write, but I don't want to read it again! It puts a whole new dimension on romance! Well written, expressive descriptions, cleverly designed and composed. Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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royowen, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! jls
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I,loved it!
Comment from c_lucas
Lovers are noted for making their own music during the course of their own lovemaking. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Lovers are noted for making their own music during the course of their own lovemaking. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Charlie, thank you ever so much for stopping by to read and review my work. I am truly humbled by the response of this work.I apologize for just responding to this review. My time is quite limited on this site. Again a big thank you! Jimi
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You're welcome,Jimi. Charlie
Comment from Aussie
Goodness gracious me! Now I am learning Italian? I think this write is most clever Mrs Violin. String along with thee. You must love music to know all those names? Each body is like an instrument and can either be well played to crescendo or badly played to broken strings representing broken hearts. Well done Jimi.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Goodness gracious me! Now I am learning Italian? I think this write is most clever Mrs Violin. String along with thee. You must love music to know all those names? Each body is like an instrument and can either be well played to crescendo or badly played to broken strings representing broken hearts. Well done Jimi.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Sweet sweet friend, goodness, I do love musci among a host of other things! Another belated thank you and hugs!!! I appreciate you so much..
Jimi
Comment from reconciled
Jimi...doesn't do quickie's Ray. She is nothing if not first class Lady. ....ain't that right Jimi...-smile-...hello...your maestro certainly seems to have gained your attentions respect...a lil' daring for you to express yourself so....much. its a very moving read...at this very moment I'm planning to grow my hair long, purchase a shrunken electric guitar and riding crop....haha....love michael
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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Jimi...doesn't do quickie's Ray. She is nothing if not first class Lady. ....ain't that right Jimi...-smile-...hello...your maestro certainly seems to have gained your attentions respect...a lil' daring for you to express yourself so....much. its a very moving read...at this very moment I'm planning to grow my hair long, purchase a shrunken electric guitar and riding crop....haha....love michael
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2014
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reconciled, my Maestro's attentions respect? Ummm and just where is this Maestro? You must know something I don't.
Well thanks for telling Ray I'm a lady but I don't think you really mean that. Lol
Daring for me? No not really. But then you really don't know me that well. I don't consider this too daring, do you?
Long hair and riding crops? I was hoping you'd focus on the beauty of the violin and Adagio. Adagio has a history you know between two people who use to be friends and tried to be more. It was the only piece I could find playing Adagio in sweet surrender. Leave your hair alone.I am sure you will do just fine when you find that curvey dulcet melodic violin.
On another note, thank you but I don't know why you are reviewing me given our history. I certainly cannot reciprocate because you kind of muted me. Can't blame you. It is what it is. I have no idea if you have posted anything lately, but it's my loss and I understand. I keep intruding where I am not welcome.
Have a good day reconciled. See ya around.
Again thank you. Jls
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LOL........-headshake-.....you win.
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To the victor goes the spoils. Not a victory if you ask me. Didn't realize I was in a poker game or a tug of war.
Maybe it is what it is a love/
hate relationship if indeed it is a relationship at all. My side is a little off skelter for there is not hate involved. I would like the chance to start over, but sometimes the kind of hurt I have inflicted cannot mend. Can't put humpty dumpty back together again. Have a great day reconciled.
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-headtilt-.....you set me up. all of this...is was...some kind of game for you. I told you I wasn't ready...was afraid you would pity me in my place....strange how life plays out....where even here....I pity you. see you around J Sevell
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No Michael, I did not set you up. Don't pity me. You want to put your life right here buddy, let's do it. Look I can't say how I truly felt and how sorry I am anymore than I have. I never coaxed you to do anything. I told you to take your time. So please Michael, don't put that monkey on my back.As much as it pains me to say this,the only thing you have ever and will stay in love with is your pain. You think others don't notice? I have reached out to and I have apologized profusely, but you Michael can't see worth beyond your own world. You want to hash it out here, no problems. I care for you always will. You ruminate on things that have no basis. I can't pity you for evidently you have enough pity for yourself to serve the world. You want to throw below the belt punches, go ahead. You have no idea what I am capable of when disparaging unjust remarks spill from your foolishness. Stop you God poems because you are far from a representation of Godliness such as forgiveness and mercy! You have your demons, but Michael from the little I know about you, your hurt and pathetic life could not begin to rival mine, couldn't touch it with a ten foot pole, but you in all your self indulgent love of pain can't see another's pain and struggles where it counts.
You have a great day. I tried. You're heart is so filled with hate, not just for others, but for yourself. Save your life, go see a heart surgeon.
It's Savell, not Sevell.
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YOUR WORDS" THE POWER OF LOVE OVERCOMES ALL" TOO BAD YOU HAVE THE KNOWLEDGE BUT LITTLE UNDERSTANDING. Hypocrite
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you're master plan...? Miss Savell, please...gather yourself....you're about to embark on a voyage of truth.....you created this......for your come back dabue....or whatever reasoning twirls betwixt your ears....sorry for what....? what is it that YOU keep telling everyone you've apologized perfusely for....what is it ...I said I would never forgive you for...? hmm...? YOU wish to "Hash" this out in the open....whatever "this" is....I have been -headtilt- curious as to your motive for days now.....-smile-....okay Miss ALL THAT....you want sword fight with me....ewww....you do have balls....bring it pussycat....I've never been afraid you... You lie openly and without remorse....you know your not muted....you also...text me to tell me how wonderful you think my new releases are. Your not very good at this sneaky shit...maybe you should consider stopping....think about it...-wink-...you reached out to me....yes yes you did...and I gave you my hand....where you sunk your fangs into it. Dear woman....where was I born...? what mountains have I climbed...? How many scars own my body...? My pain...is mine.......I bled here and it offended you forgive me...for being real....and I'll forgive you for....not. Fair...? I was not going to take your bait....but when I read Ray....say what he did...in fun , I'm sure....I felt compelled to recue you....-headshake-.... Listen closely Miss Sevall....before my God and all who read this...you smell funny.....lol
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And you stink. I don't listen to the ravings of a self ordained godless lunatic. You didn't nor did you come to my defense. You were being facetious and you know it. Your paranoia is quite evident. It is you Michael who slings highly insulting remarks without any responsibility or remorse. If you recall you muted me the very night I text you a thank you. You reek of BPD, borderline personality disorder. Go look it up. Your scars? Poor poor Michael. Your god? What is your god, for you do the one true God no honors by professing to represent Him. If you also recall I text you to ask how you were, knowing you would slap me down.And you did. So where was the funking key you so kindly but hypocritically offered? If that is not the mark of true deceit and manipulation, not to mention the ultimate in hypocrisy. Grow up Michael.
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Voyage of truth.. The difference between you and I, I am not afraid of my voyage of truth, but you have not a humble bone in your body to step out and embark on yours.
I apologized to you for the things I said, but you came back with personal attacks on my character. How loving and mature is that? Stay in love with your arrogance, your bully ways and your pain. No wonder you are alone and will be unless you find some lunacy idiot that listens to your bleeding song and then when you slap her down because of your BPD, she eagerly runs back into your weak pathetic hold.
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as I said....even here....-headshake-...
Comment from Domino 2
Wow, Jimi. This is SO poetically passionate and original.
Wonderful choice of vocabulary for this music/romance theme.
Apart from musical terms, touches of French and Italian add to the depth of the read.
You have a special expressive talent, but will a 'quickie' do? LOL.
Here's my last sixer of the week.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Wow, Jimi. This is SO poetically passionate and original.
Wonderful choice of vocabulary for this music/romance theme.
Apart from musical terms, touches of French and Italian add to the depth of the read.
You have a special expressive talent, but will a 'quickie' do? LOL.
Here's my last sixer of the week.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 04-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Ray, oh Ray, you are so funny. Another huge thank you and a huge apology for just responding to express my appreciation! xoxoxoxxo Jimi