Reviewers Taste Like Chicken
Short Story-Contest Entry40 total reviews
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: very funny, terribly sarcastic and nasty . . . just the way you wanted it! Your creativity is delightful and I always appreciate the truth. Linda
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Michael: very funny, terribly sarcastic and nasty . . . just the way you wanted it! Your creativity is delightful and I always appreciate the truth. Linda
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from cupa tea
well, that was certainly different...But I rather like that kinda writing. Nice job good luck with the contest....Your images went well with your work...
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well, that was certainly different...But I rather like that kinda writing. Nice job good luck with the contest....Your images went well with your work...
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Clever, Mikey. This was hilarious. I love it -- a coyote with a sheep outfit on. So Chicken Nit Pickin' was a tasty delight! You only eat the people you love! I should know, cuzz-- I'm a Dingo. if you ever get Down Under, give me a howl. I will come running. These damn Wombats and kangaroo are hard to catch. I need your help, Willy Coyote. I get no satisfaction, with me tabefaction. Ar e you sure you don't have another suit under that coyote pelt? Don't trick me and be an Aborigine. I dropped six piles of dung near that river bed. Them dung beatles need to eat too. Finger lickin' good!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Clever, Mikey. This was hilarious. I love it -- a coyote with a sheep outfit on. So Chicken Nit Pickin' was a tasty delight! You only eat the people you love! I should know, cuzz-- I'm a Dingo. if you ever get Down Under, give me a howl. I will come running. These damn Wombats and kangaroo are hard to catch. I need your help, Willy Coyote. I get no satisfaction, with me tabefaction. Ar e you sure you don't have another suit under that coyote pelt? Don't trick me and be an Aborigine. I dropped six piles of dung near that river bed. Them dung beatles need to eat too. Finger lickin' good!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2014
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Awesome review! Most appreciated. The funny things is that of all the pieces I've posted the two best received have been about chickens. Hahahaha. Forget saving the world. Chess playing chickens or wolves BBQing chickens is what I'm best at!!!
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That was tricky, coyote had a sheep outfit on. There are some nip pickin' chickens around.
Comment from CR Delport
Mikey, you sure have a unique way of looking at things, and I love it! As always, this is very well written and should do well in the contest. Good luck.
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Mikey, you sure have a unique way of looking at things, and I love it! As always, this is very well written and should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from mfowler
Well, Mikey, it seems like all of our animals are having a hard time on FS: bad reviews, underappreciated. This is a funny and accurate (in some cases) look at the place. Our cyberworld is a strange place and I think animal analogies make great sense as a mode for satire. It's like using finger puppets to teach children hard lessons on life without saying it directly. You should do well with this. May the best animal win.
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Well, Mikey, it seems like all of our animals are having a hard time on FS: bad reviews, underappreciated. This is a funny and accurate (in some cases) look at the place. Our cyberworld is a strange place and I think animal analogies make great sense as a mode for satire. It's like using finger puppets to teach children hard lessons on life without saying it directly. You should do well with this. May the best animal win.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2014
Comment from Judy Couch
I figured out that the light gray was thoughts. It's pretty obvious. Your story is funny and expresses some of the stuff that happens on fanstory. Fortunately, it doesn't happen very often.
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I figured out that the light gray was thoughts. It's pretty obvious. Your story is funny and expresses some of the stuff that happens on fanstory. Fortunately, it doesn't happen very often.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Jay Leeward
Definitely did enjoy! Lighthearted romp through FanStory dealing satirical barbs right and left. I did see a review reply or two that I think are worth stealing.
I especially want to thank you for the haiku review. I've been trying to figure out how to review them, since I know almost nothing about haiku. I'll file off the serial numbers and use it intact. ;)
I suspect this is going to be a very strong contender in this contest. Thanks for the enjoyment.
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Definitely did enjoy! Lighthearted romp through FanStory dealing satirical barbs right and left. I did see a review reply or two that I think are worth stealing.
I especially want to thank you for the haiku review. I've been trying to figure out how to review them, since I know almost nothing about haiku. I'll file off the serial numbers and use it intact. ;)
I suspect this is going to be a very strong contender in this contest. Thanks for the enjoyment.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Ha ha ha ha ha a wolf in sheepskin clothing.....
Yes this is great................the love train to loverville.............ha ha ha ha
A haiku.....a cuckoo clock minus the cuck
God bless
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Ha ha ha ha ha a wolf in sheepskin clothing.....
Yes this is great................the love train to loverville.............ha ha ha ha
A haiku.....a cuckoo clock minus the cuck
God bless
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from madhatter1977
Very creative and amusing, Mikey! I got a one star review for a satire poem off someone who hadn't posted last year. She didn't like the humour, LOL! Great post and good luck mate! Pete :)
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Very creative and amusing, Mikey! I got a one star review for a satire poem off someone who hadn't posted last year. She didn't like the humour, LOL! Great post and good luck mate! Pete :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Awesome, Mikey! This is a BIZARRE contest idea to start with... knew it had to be yours... LOL! And your entry is wonderfully bizarre in the true Mikey spirit. :)
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Awesome, Mikey! This is a BIZARRE contest idea to start with... knew it had to be yours... LOL! And your entry is wonderfully bizarre in the true Mikey spirit. :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2014