Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. It is about wasting time. Time wondering about 'What ifs'. Daydreaming is a good thing if you act on some of these dreams once in a while. You can not get time back. Pay attention. Great work. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from GeraldS

Excellent

Wasting time by thinking about wasted time. Still not as pointless as spending hours playing pointless computer games.

This poem is nicely written and gives the pensive reader something to think about. For many of us time is our stock in trade, particularly as we grow older.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is a serious and pensive free verse poem... well done and descriptive.The theme is kept up and your words are well chosen. Great matching artwork.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from tdragonfly

Excellent

This poem could be about most of us at one time or the other. How we procrastinate and waste away hours and even days. Thank you for not procrastinating on writing this poem.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

It's so easy for us to get lost in our thoughts and literally dream the day away. I think you captured that nicely in this poem. And, what's more, the time wasn't wasted. Nicely done. Hugs, lou

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Idamarty, this is a wonderfully written piece of free verse poetry for this great competition, we all have thsoe lazy days reflectinng how things could have been better had we got off our backsides and actually done something, good luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

reply by Eric1 on 26-Aug-2014

You are welcome Idamarty.

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

Oh yes I picked up on those eagles titles and damn you are right when you say we oughta love em ! Don Henly, Glenn Frei .. life in the fast lane !

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from Lastamen

Excellent

A compelling entry into this intriguing contest. Capturing the essence of this timeless (no pun intended) piece, the author has contrived a well balanced and evenly paced offering. Well done.

Till the last amen

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

I love this poem. It speaks of bygone moments in time. The poem flowed freely. The images are strong. whiling away her time she speaks of moments of varied settings...the shores.... She was overcome with nostalgia. Overall the poem is great, to me it is written beautifully. Congratulations. Dom.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.

reply by Dom G Robles on 26-Aug-2014

You are welcome. Dom

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

This non-rhyming poem depicts the paradox of wasting time by spending a day regretting past wasted time. The message might well be, that regrets are in themselves, wasted time. The picture is a perfect match to the theme.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2014

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...I am so glad you enjoyed the write...blessings.