Comment from padumachitta

Excellent

LOL..roll on the floor...this is so clever. I wondered at the title...but the visuals were great. You are really witty, and your sense of humour often makes my day.
Thank you for this...I am going to print it and use it as my theme header by my romance novels....Nora Roberts beware:-)
padumachitta

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

What great accolades. Poor Nora. (whom I never read). :-)

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

It speaks for itself, and does it verrrry well. LOL! Another good one, Shari. You just keep 'em coming like peanuts. And I wouldn't mind helping that young hunk with his embarrassing problem. :)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Oh, I had so much fun finding a picture for this poem. :-)

Comment from gypsycaravan

Excellent

The double-entendre here is too funny. That was clever and well done. Not every poem gives you something to think about as well as a HUGE visual. Ha.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

I actually had to crop the picture as pubic hair begin to show.
Thanks for noting the double-entendre.

Comment from IndianaIrish

Excellent

LMAO!! Your senryu is so delightfully naughty, Sheri, or is it my gutter brain? Such a funny play on words. Loved it.
Smiles,
Karyn : )

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Guess I should have warned you, karyn, that I dabble with dirty once in a while. :-)

Comment from Kaila Mari

Excellent

Good senryu with double entendre. With 17 syllables you have managed to captivate readers erotic nuances. Great picture adds to the imagery of the read. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Thanks for bringing your imagination to this. You got it, girl. :-)

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

"erotic novel
lands in reader's handy lap
cover-up motion"
haha. this is a witty little piece of poetry! i can just imagine the outcome..
thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

let's just hope it's not a library book. :-)

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

OH Spitfire...girl after my own heart. Thanks for encouraging me in my evil ways. LOL. Great photo...funny words. Loved it.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Thanks, granny. Nothing like opening people's eyes. L0L

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

Why do I get the feeling that the erotic novel landed in a naked lap ... or maybe nekked.

These shorties are somewhat annoying but sometimes I get to use my imagination and really make them interesting. Ii could make this one into a novel.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

A left-handed compliment (no pun intended)Imagination is the key. Is the reader male of female for one thing. :-)

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

Ha-ha! Between Spitfire and Granny Goes Viral something's gonna happen with a little turn on the word:

Very cleverly portrayed. You wrote a provocative poem, Spitfire and did it in 17 sexy, salacious syllables

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

She loved this poem. I'll have to check her out. :-)

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

She loved this poem. I'll have to check her out. :-)

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Hi Shari,
I liked this very much:) The book lands in the lap and the cover goes up...is that double entendre intentional:) Great job with this one--Ted

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014

Absolutely. If the reader's a female guess what she's doing. L0L