Comment from Sarlou

Excellent

I enjoyed this! You've accentuated with metaphors and words that strike the senses, the sounds. It's beautifully written and meaningful. Easy to relate to.
Sarlou xx

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2005

Comment from Louanne

Excellent

Simple, but delving deep into
the nuances and the many
feelings within these words.

Hopefully, you will always
experience them in their
most beautiful and sincere
context as "unconditional
love".

A fine write today, JJ.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2005

Comment from Walter L. Jones

Excellent

In the words we find all that is needed, a gift to keep going, we are as good as our word and more. Actions speak, still the words flood and the feel is good.. Nice write.. Walt

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2005

Comment from Aleksandramarie

Excellent

Hmmmm this is just rolls right through you.

a very strong, imagery and then message,

like a storm surge, as I watch the tv, sort of unrelenting...

thanks,mspotter

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2005

Comment from Zenbud

Excellent

Very beautiful - strange we both focused on words this day? Not really, huh? I loved the message - bruised we still seek and hope. Wishes to you and thanks for the lovely words. Zen

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2005