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Acrostic & 5-7-5 Combo - just for fun.23 total reviews
Comment from Smoothiecool
you have cleverly combined the Acrostic with the 5-7-5 verses
good visual in each to portray message clearly
good enjambment in verses with free flow
good alliteration in
sweet, slumber
morning, mist
songs, sung
destiny's, despatched
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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you have cleverly combined the Acrostic with the 5-7-5 verses
good visual in each to portray message clearly
good enjambment in verses with free flow
good alliteration in
sweet, slumber
morning, mist
songs, sung
destiny's, despatched
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed this and always very grateful for the lovely words of encouragement and support.
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always welcome
have a blessed week
cheers..SC >. Faye
Comment from Dawn Munro
This is so lovely, and it's true - surprising us at times, direct and clear thinking hits as we open our eyes. Funny how that works...are our dreams sorting things out for us? *smile*
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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This is so lovely, and it's true - surprising us at times, direct and clear thinking hits as we open our eyes. Funny how that works...are our dreams sorting things out for us? *smile*
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Dawn! I know my mid is in a continual state of learning each night as I am amazed by what I wake up having learned. I am so happy you liked this and value your kind encouragement tremendously.
Comment from krys123
Mystic Angel;
Wow! the imagination you used in your imagery is fantastic and it is so very descriptive and brilliantly expressive that portrays far-reaching thoughts that are developed in a very creative and inventive mind.
A great acrostic poem even with alliteration is well written and very easy to read. I especially like the one with the pattern reaches the paper and it weds to people.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read it may the Lord be with you always especially in your time of need.
Alex
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Mystic Angel;
Wow! the imagination you used in your imagery is fantastic and it is so very descriptive and brilliantly expressive that portrays far-reaching thoughts that are developed in a very creative and inventive mind.
A great acrostic poem even with alliteration is well written and very easy to read. I especially like the one with the pattern reaches the paper and it weds to people.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read it may the Lord be with you always especially in your time of need.
Alex
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Alex! I am very happy you liked this and wish you many wonderful words downloaded nightly through your slumber. I am always grateful for the time you take to provide such positive feedback.
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You are so sincerely welcome my dearest friend.
Comment from l.raven
HI Angel, I get my best thoughts driving down the road...some times I grab the Kleenex box and start writing on it...LOL...love your poem....and the picture..luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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HI Angel, I get my best thoughts driving down the road...some times I grab the Kleenex box and start writing on it...LOL...love your poem....and the picture..luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Linda! LOL at the Kleenex box - I carry a digital recorder with me these days since I got tired of pens running out of ink. I am happy you enjoyed this and send you HUGS of gratitude for the encouraging review.
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I had a recorder...it kept messing up...I need a new one....soon...it will be hard to make a officer understand why I am driving while trying to write on a Kleenex box...LOL...you are so welcome....luff
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LOL .... you will be responsible for a new law - NO Kleenex while driving.
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LOL...OH don't laugh ...never say never...anything can happen...LOL
Comment from Capricorn30
Your author notes are spot on--I couldn't agree more! Well stated!
Nice alliteration incorporated into the first stanza;
The finest poetry derived from deepest slumber;
Sleep gently slips away as that of morning mist, permitting poetry to smoothly flow.
Stunning artwork to introduce a well-penned acrostic/5-7-5.
You need to create a name for this great format!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Your author notes are spot on--I couldn't agree more! Well stated!
Nice alliteration incorporated into the first stanza;
The finest poetry derived from deepest slumber;
Sleep gently slips away as that of morning mist, permitting poetry to smoothly flow.
Stunning artwork to introduce a well-penned acrostic/5-7-5.
You need to create a name for this great format!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I have a friend who does editing and thinks this should be called a "Moniku" LOL - I find that kind of funny. I am thrilled that you enjoyed this and always so very grateful for the lovely words of encouragement.
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a "Moniku"--I like it! Go for it!
Comment from Angel Debbie
Great word that word is and you filled it with much joy in the words you have chose.
Interesting combination of types of poetry you have it worked out well.
Thank You for sharing this wonderfully written piece of art!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Great word that word is and you filled it with much joy in the words you have chose.
Interesting combination of types of poetry you have it worked out well.
Thank You for sharing this wonderfully written piece of art!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed this and always very grateful for the lovely words of encouragement and support.
Comment from Selina Stambi
The author notes made me smile and nod - that's why I keep a notebook and pen on the nightstand by my bed!
Nice acrostic, MA.
Hope you're having a lovely week. :)
Love,
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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The author notes made me smile and nod - that's why I keep a notebook and pen on the nightstand by my bed!
Nice acrostic, MA.
Hope you're having a lovely week. :)
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from Donna McNaughton
I don't know about you, but I need to keep a pad and pen by my bed or else I'm running into my computer room before the thoughts leave my head. You did a great job putting this phenomenon into an acrostic.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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I don't know about you, but I need to keep a pad and pen by my bed or else I'm running into my computer room before the thoughts leave my head. You did a great job putting this phenomenon into an acrostic.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's a pretty poem. Nice picture. Good Alliteration. It's true, I seem to get my best lines in the night and I have them in my head when I awaken. If I don't jot them down the abandon me and they are lost forever!Good Job. Nancy
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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It's a pretty poem. Nice picture. Good Alliteration. It's true, I seem to get my best lines in the night and I have them in my head when I awaken. If I don't jot them down the abandon me and they are lost forever!Good Job. Nancy
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so thrilled that this style is so well received. The traditional Acrostic leaves the reader feeling a bit flat and I am shooting for something a bit more multi-dimensional with this format. I am very grateful for all the wonderfully encouraging support.
Comment from rod007
I like this poetic style. The lines I loved the most:
'When dawn in splendor
awakens from sweet slumber
morning mist departs'
I can picture the vivid image it creates. A great poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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I like this poetic style. The lines I loved the most:
'When dawn in splendor
awakens from sweet slumber
morning mist departs'
I can picture the vivid image it creates. A great poem. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you enjoyed this and always very grateful for the lovely words of encouragement and support.