Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing this sweet love poem. I love the picture of the two of you together way back when. I hope your honey is able to come home soon,
~patty~

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks Sis the third verse only got added this AM have to add another verse to the music I hope you hears might add harmony if file not too big in FS

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love reading and hearing about your musings dear bro, and listening to your musical application of the life and times of Mr. and Mrs. Geoff Sankey. Nice little poem about you and your dearest one, well done, Geoff, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks Bro now go back real quick I just added another verse. Sorry, the music has not covered the new verse yet. Have tO work on that. Check Author notes for an explanation of the new verse. I think you know she is in hospital atm anyway. KIrd Bless. and thanks agaIN.

reply by royowen on 06-Jun-2017

Most welcome

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a fun write with a loving message, simple and honest and a joy to read, I can hear it being sung on a warm sultry night, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Hope you heard the tune. Have to click on the Link at the top . Thanks for the lovely review.

reply by Dolly'sPoems on 06-Jun-2017

I listened! Great stuff! Love Dolly x

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Hey, friend I just added a new verse music doesn't cover it yet read Author notes for an explanation of the new verse. Thanks for the lovely review.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh so cute, both the music and the poem. I love the photograph. You, two are so happy together. It's great to see and it shines brightly through this poem.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks, Sis pray she can come home from the hospital before too much longer we miss our lives together here at home.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is a delightful poem and I enjoyed the music that accompanied it too. How is your wife doing? Is she still in the hospital? I hope she is getting better.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Still at the hospital Sasha. Glad you heard the tuneI might try and add Harmony to it. I only converted it from a Midi to MP3 the other day. I think MP3's work better generally on all systems. ONlything is whether the file is too big if I add harmony for FS. Thanks for the great review.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Sankey. This is a charming photo and poem of the two of you. So nice to see and read about a couple who are so fond of each other. A great gift. Marilyn

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks Sis I hope you heard the music. Most of the reviewers are catching it.You need to click on the link at the top of the page. Appreciate the lovely review. Pray she can come home from the hospital soon.

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

Sounds like you talking about my husband and I . Being we now live in a RV together with two dogs, you can imagine how nuts. I go to the supermarket just to get away sometimes. But I love the rascal.
hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks Heidi someone said they did not hear the music let me know if you missed that too. Should have told folks to click on the link for that at the top of the page.

reply by bookishfabler on 06-Jun-2017

I turn the sound off my computer in the morning. However, I had forgotten and I got a shock when it came on automatically. So it worked. I prefer to read in silence. I see Dean Kuch and hit the silent button before I open up his work. LOL.
hugs Heidi

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Yeah I understand about Dean. I don't mind him but I should do what you do with the sound button sometimes hehe.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. It is clearly a proud possession to have a relationship where both partners love the other equally without a doubt. We accept their shortcomings with the same attitude as their assets.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Hey I hope you heard the music. Have to click on the Link at the top if you missed it. Thanks for the great review. Only married year when the photo was taken.

Comment from apky

Exceptional

This was such a pleasant surprise and a wonderful romantic poem for the romantic hearted like me.

Just like in real life, things are never all smooth or all rough, all sweet or all sour. Sometimes arguments flare up out of the most inane things. But when we burst out laughing at our idiocy and make up again, this is the harmony that keeps a relationship intact, the fire of love kindled.

Thanks for this, Sankey.

Cheers,
Akin

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Thanks new friend. I hope you heard the tune I wrote for the poem? If not go back and click on the link at the top of the page. It isM{3 so everyone should be able to hear it I think.

reply by apky on 06-Jun-2017

Yep I just heard the tune. Short & sweet!

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Glad you heard it some have not I think they forgot to click on the link. It does not come up automatically as a BGSound file.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a fine piece of romance poetry dear sankey! very simplistically written yet a profound sentiment. nice one my friend.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

Hi rebekka I hope you heard the tune. It was originally a Midi but I just today converted it to an MP3 so everyone should be able to hear it now. Cheers and thanks again.

reply by rjuselius on 06-Jun-2017

actually i didn't hear it..

reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017

I am sorry I thought as an MP3 it should be accessible to everyone
Maybe I need to tell people to click on the link on top left of the page. Sorry about that.

reply by rjuselius on 06-Jun-2017

no worries.