Fairest of Them All
A classic remade20 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well done with this nicely designed rhyming couplet poem dedicated to be a flow on from the seven dwarf contest, that has just gone before! The only difference is the dear old queen got hers in this well written poetic fairy tale saga! This was smoothly written, with a nice image generating, poem! Nice aabb rhyming, even meter. Well done, blessings, Roy.
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Well done with this nicely designed rhyming couplet poem dedicated to be a flow on from the seven dwarf contest, that has just gone before! The only difference is the dear old queen got hers in this well written poetic fairy tale saga! This was smoothly written, with a nice image generating, poem! Nice aabb rhyming, even meter. Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from dennis0530
The writing is about the consequences of relying too much in a reflected image. Sometimes it is deluding leaving one with a sense of false believe. This much the writer is saying in the line, "that's what you get when believing in a mirror."
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The writing is about the consequences of relying too much in a reflected image. Sometimes it is deluding leaving one with a sense of false believe. This much the writer is saying in the line, "that's what you get when believing in a mirror."
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from DanielEkine
This author is definitely the winner of the contest. I can't wait to hear the good news. Very defined. Very pleasing to read. It breaks my heart in a beautiful way. Great job.
The command of alliteration makes me smile. The artwork is daring and snaring. Oh, I am in love with this work.
"wall?/fall?/pure?/sure.
strong/wrong/grace/face.
me/see/I/die.
way/pay/deal/meal.
hand?/Disneyland./men/win."
compare/share./silver./mirror."
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This author is definitely the winner of the contest. I can't wait to hear the good news. Very defined. Very pleasing to read. It breaks my heart in a beautiful way. Great job.
The command of alliteration makes me smile. The artwork is daring and snaring. Oh, I am in love with this work.
"wall?/fall?/pure?/sure.
strong/wrong/grace/face.
me/see/I/die.
way/pay/deal/meal.
hand?/Disneyland./men/win."
compare/share./silver./mirror."
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from nomi338
Beautiful. I am currently writing a series of fairy tales with alternative story lines, they are story lines that like yours reference the original, but dovetail in many different directions with vastly different endings.
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Beautiful. I am currently writing a series of fairy tales with alternative story lines, they are story lines that like yours reference the original, but dovetail in many different directions with vastly different endings.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from judy.gordon
Your writing flowed very well. There was a grammatical error. Casted should be cast. I enjoyed this poem. I think that "Bitch" is too strong of a word to use in this poem. "The little darling" would show signs of sarcasm. I think that that would be a more appropriated label.
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Your writing flowed very well. There was a grammatical error. Casted should be cast. I enjoyed this poem. I think that "Bitch" is too strong of a word to use in this poem. "The little darling" would show signs of sarcasm. I think that that would be a more appropriated label.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
This is great story telling with a twist for the great Snow White. The artwork was spot on as well.
A truly enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest!
Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi,
This is great story telling with a twist for the great Snow White. The artwork was spot on as well.
A truly enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest!
Cheers * Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from Laurie's Legacy
Nice takeoff from the snow white tale, very creative and it works well for the mirror entry. It flows nicely in the rhyming is good. The pictures of course, match the storyline and best of luck to you in the contest.
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Nice takeoff from the snow white tale, very creative and it works well for the mirror entry. It flows nicely in the rhyming is good. The pictures of course, match the storyline and best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
Comment from hsnyder0509
I LOVE THIS! It is very creative. I am an avid Disney movie watcher and this is amazing. You've really hit the nail on the head with this one. Your piece flows and makes for an easy read. I've said it once but I will say it again, your twist from Snow White is awesome! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014
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I LOVE THIS! It is very creative. I am an avid Disney movie watcher and this is amazing. You've really hit the nail on the head with this one. Your piece flows and makes for an easy read. I've said it once but I will say it again, your twist from Snow White is awesome! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
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Comment from RYME4U
This is fantasy to the nth degree. Very well written and presented well. The Snow White story is still relevant today. You did well here. Good job!
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This is fantasy to the nth degree. Very well written and presented well. The Snow White story is still relevant today. You did well here. Good job!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
Comment from prefabmouse
Very well written and it even made me giggle some. I really enjoyed your poem and your style of writing and the way you looked at the situation, so clear, so in tuned.
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Very well written and it even made me giggle some. I really enjoyed your poem and your style of writing and the way you looked at the situation, so clear, so in tuned.
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Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
