Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Superwoman"A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from CR Delport
We always think farmers have it rich, but we don't realize how many farmers are actually struggling. This is sure a good cause. Well written poem too.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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We always think farmers have it rich, but we don't realize how many farmers are actually struggling. This is sure a good cause. Well written poem too.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thanks very much I hope she does well in the fund raising and the competition in general. I donated to her fund raising effort as well.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is yet another beautiful and interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Erin must be a wonderful young woman indeed. Her heart is in the right place.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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This is yet another beautiful and interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. Erin must be a wonderful young woman indeed. Her heart is in the right place.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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yeah seems so her MUm wrote a good story in here as well look for seken something.
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Great
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a good message. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Sounds like the farmer had a beautiful daughter.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Good poem with a good message. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read and understand. Sounds like the farmer had a beautiful daughter.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Well she is currently going for a charity thing her Mum is a writer on here look for seken something. Thanks for the review mate.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Thank you Geoff.
I know this special young woman too.
Your lovely expression of support for her as she steps beyond
her comfort zone into the difficult world of fundraising is appreciated.
Her efforts to raise funds for the very worthy -BUY A BALE" to assist farmers in dire circumstances is inspiring.
Thank you for promoting her facebook page.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thank you Geoff.
I know this special young woman too.
Your lovely expression of support for her as she steps beyond
her comfort zone into the difficult world of fundraising is appreciated.
Her efforts to raise funds for the very worthy -BUY A BALE" to assist farmers in dire circumstances is inspiring.
Thank you for promoting her facebook page.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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No worries always glad to help as we can. Woohoo big six thanks! Appreciate the review I might add some more verses later.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hi Geoff,
A great limerick-y poem with food for thought.
I understand that the plight of the Aussie farmers is still bad.
Have a great week, friend. Nice talking to you.
Sonali
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Hi Geoff,
A great limerick-y poem with food for thought.
I understand that the plight of the Aussie farmers is still bad.
Have a great week, friend. Nice talking to you.
Sonali
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Yeah I thought Limericky too but never meant it to be any kind of humourous thing. Thanks for the review. I just added a bit to one of the later chapters in my book if interested. I have promoted that too if you care to look. A bit of a funny thing that happened during our renovations in 2006.
Comment from Leonardo Wild
Nice little poem, Sankey. Touching and very human.
Nevertheless, the:
--A Poem about an adventurous young woman.
>>Somehow does not fit the content. She cares about farmers, that's what I got out of it, not that she's adventurous. Or maybe I'm missing something ... which can also be the case.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Nice little poem, Sankey. Touching and very human.
Nevertheless, the:
--A Poem about an adventurous young woman.
>>Somehow does not fit the content. She cares about farmers, that's what I got out of it, not that she's adventurous. Or maybe I'm missing something ... which can also be the case.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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You are probably right but if you read what her Mother dsays about her you would understand more of the adventurous. I will see if I can link you up with what her Mum wrote (in FS) ok thanks for the review anyway.
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I changed the notes or the sub heading or whatever
Comment from DanielEkine
That is a beautiful girl. It's intriguing.
"I've met a young lady named Erin,
As a farm girl she's certainly rearin'
She's got quite a name
Put's others to shame
Cos she cares how the farmers are farin'"
Nicely written.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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That is a beautiful girl. It's intriguing.
"I've met a young lady named Erin,
As a farm girl she's certainly rearin'
She's got quite a name
Put's others to shame
Cos she cares how the farmers are farin'"
Nicely written.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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thanks Daniel have not seen you around for a while where ya bin? Appreciate the review I met her Mum here on FS and liked what her Mum wrote about her and I decided to donate to her cause.
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That is beautiful. Sorry I was away. I went to school as a Cosmetologist to be a well-rounded artist. Now back, and not bothered. Just doing what I love doing. Which is writing my hearts out.
Comment from c_lucas
Caring is not to be taken lightly. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Caring is not to be taken lightly. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Thanks mate I was impressed when I read her Mum's story about all Erin does on their farm. Hence the name of the poem. I already made a donation to her fundraising. Thanks for reading ands the great review.
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You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie
Comment from Nosha17
I liked your limerick style poem. Your rhymes worked well and you made good use of humour and language. Enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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I liked your limerick style poem. Your rhymes worked well and you made good use of humour and language. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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thanks Fasye I am seeking to support the young lady who I have met through her Mum who wrote about her charity drive here on FS. Look for seken something she is Erin's Mum.
Comment from royowen
A very funny, what looks and smells like a Limerick, Geoff, one of my regrets is, I've never stayed on a farm for any length, apart from doing a little fruit picking in my youth! I liked this poem Geoff, I hope it gets good reviews for you! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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A very funny, what looks and smells like a Limerick, Geoff, one of my regrets is, I've never stayed on a farm for any length, apart from doing a little fruit picking in my youth! I liked this poem Geoff, I hope it gets good reviews for you! Well done, blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014
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Well mainly supporting a young lady whose Mum wrote in FS about her efforts in raising money for farmers in need.
Thanks Bro. seken something is the Mum who wrote in here.