Try To Imagine
Just a little something to think about.14 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
outstanding and life can seem at times its so hard to deal with but then we need to put our shoes in theirs and i really enjoyed reading this well done
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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outstanding and life can seem at times its so hard to deal with but then we need to put our shoes in theirs and i really enjoyed reading this well done
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this. Yes, one day reality hit me and inspired some new thoughts that I carry with me now always! Thank you again, so much!
Comment from Nosha17
Yes, I agree with you, we have so many blessings compared to others less fortunate, but we still complain. Your rhymes worked well and you made good use of language to convey your strong message. Enjoyable read. Faye
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Yes, I agree with you, we have so many blessings compared to others less fortunate, but we still complain. Your rhymes worked well and you made good use of language to convey your strong message. Enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you so much for the kind words. What a nice review. Thanks again.
Comment from judester
A poem of gratefulness. When you begin to count your blessings and hold your head high, you quickly realize that life could always be worse. Volunteering at homeless shelters and orphanages will always drive that point home in a hurry, cheers, we are blessed Judester. In Africa, every day I realize the advantage I have had with good schooling and medicare in Canada growing up. The one eyed man in the village of the blind, is King
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A poem of gratefulness. When you begin to count your blessings and hold your head high, you quickly realize that life could always be worse. Volunteering at homeless shelters and orphanages will always drive that point home in a hurry, cheers, we are blessed Judester. In Africa, every day I realize the advantage I have had with good schooling and medicare in Canada growing up. The one eyed man in the village of the blind, is King
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Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you for this added enlightment to being grateful. You are just so right Surely, I am thankful that I have overcome a very messy, self-pitying thinking syndrome where I have learned to transform all of my negative and sad childhood experiences into a positive, thankful and forgiving new life. Again, thank you.
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Never too late for a happy childhood...I wish you peace,love and clarity. Cheers Judester
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Thank you.
Comment from Jackarrie
a beautiful poem of great positive messages written in rhyming couplets.
I totally agree with the sentiments of this write, We need to look around at the less fortunate, and be very grateful for our lives, nobody escapes hard times. but "attitude is more important than the fact"
Well written,
Mary
.And she'd that tear for those less fortunate than you.
(shed) I do not think the hyphen should be there.
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a beautiful poem of great positive messages written in rhyming couplets.
I totally agree with the sentiments of this write, We need to look around at the less fortunate, and be very grateful for our lives, nobody escapes hard times. but "attitude is more important than the fact"
Well written,
Mary
.And she'd that tear for those less fortunate than you.
(shed) I do not think the hyphen should be there.
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Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind words. Yes, if only all the world could follow this. Also, thank you for the heads up on the she'd. I wrote on my ipad and it automatically added the apostraphe. I did change it. Thanks, once again!
