Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

stunning presentation of your poem
good use of abcb rhyming with a strong closing couplet
good alliteration in seen from the sky and in body and bright
lovely descriptive detail with an upbeat mood :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

Thank you much, my friend. Have a great day~Debbie

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Sometimes I think we are kindred hearts. I have often wished I had wings. I think the feeling of floating through the sky would be wonderful. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very stunning and beautiful of an butterfly and spreading the wings if only we could be like that. well done it was pleasure to read

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 Comment Written 27-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 19-May-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie