Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

How sweet and cute LOL
I can only imagine the look on Robert's face when he looks out to see Granny in the front row. LOL
And I don't even want to think about Mary's face. :-) This is very funny. A play about chairs, very clever... Brooke

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks, imagined myself sitting next to grandma and loved the shock value.

Comment from bluedragon776

Excellent

Hilarious, a grandmother is going to see her son dance Chippendales style. HA love it! I hope she has a strong heart! Good luck!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks so much.

Comment from Pegcook

Excellent

This is hilarious! The reader can see the two elderly ladies entering the theatre and settling in their front row seats (a real important piece of information)! And one can only imagine what happened when the show began. Excellent work!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks. I'd love to be sitting in adjacent seats.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah, boy, won't those ladies be in for a HUGE surprise, lol? Perhaps they can all learn something from such a performance, who knows? Stranger things have been known to happen.

Very funny & clever. Good luck in the prompt!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks. Happy to provide laughter.

Comment from JBCaine

Excellent

Author X-
For shame, for shame. Nice twist there.
Well done, as I am still chuckling.
Luck to you in the contest.
JBCaine-

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks so much.

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

What else can I say. . .you got a laugh out of me :-)
And sent my mind off to the races. . .writing the closing scene!
Human drama about to be revealed LOL

nice one :-)

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks. I appreciate the read and response.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your few choice words allow the reader to see and feel the two old ladies having tickets to a show that Mary's grandson is in, Mary thinking it is a play

flows well easy read

who is going to get the biggest surprise??

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

I have to say, I'd love to be sitting next to the old lady in the audience.

reply by Smoothiecool on 15-Apr-2014

that's another story in itself
cheers SC

Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Lol, two old ladies about to have heart attacks. Haven't heard of the Chippendales in years, wonder if they are still around. Great story, and well told in so few words. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Oh, yes, the grandson's still have an act in Vegas. I'm sure they're a franchise. Thanks.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

Boy are those old women in for the surprise of their lives when they realize that chip-n-dales are male dancers. Not to mention Robert's surprise when he spots his granny cheering him on. LOL

Great job with the 100 word story. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Funny how it seems easier to be seen naked in front of strangers than one's own family, isn't it?

reply by Cajungirl on 15-Apr-2014

Hahaha, you are right.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

The Chippendales may be the reason there's a coffin on the stage. Mom may need to be hospitalized and Dad given a sedative. Cool ending!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Is there a coffin in this picture? God, my eyes are hot. I never saw that, chose it for the curtains...LOL...how bizarre!