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Released from prison

About me coming home from hospital

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Comment from l.raven
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Hi Ine, you always feel lost when you first come home...and your muse well catch right back up to you...was with you the whole time you were in the hospital...I know...I read your poems...they were excellent writes...give yourself some time...just so glad you are home...Luff ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from seaglass
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Personal prisons are debilitating to our entire self. Your poem in free verse, describes the frustration of re-gathering self. The muse is often the most important as with it, we create and by creating we restore ourselves.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from emrpoems
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You are very resilient and your muse has stayed with you throughout so no need to fear. You will be well soon.
Interesting artwork

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from amada
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It's great to know your surgery went well and you are back from the hospital. Take it easy in your recovery, your muse will come back. Best.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from Joan E.
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I knew immediately when I saw the title what this poem would describe--I've been waiting for you to tell us about your release! I admired your "prison" metaphor and know your muse will return soon. Yes, do "take it one day at a time". Hugs and calm Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I'm Happy to see you are home again Ine. I pray for your speedy recovery and continued good health in the future.
Are you subject to tube feeding now for a while? Take it slow. You are weak. Love Nancy

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from krys123
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Ine, I found your poem very interesting, resourceful and creative in your poem shows your ingenuity, skill and astuteness. However the ending could use a little work because it reads awkwardly. A suggestion: "Muse flying over the sea out of reach for you to see please come home to me".
Thank you for sharing and posting your work for everyone and may you always find love.
Alex

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
reply by krys123 on 24-Mar-2014
    Ine, You are so entirely and sincerely welcome. And you have a nice week ahead.
    Alex
Comment from Joy Graham
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So good to hear from you again, Ine. I hope the surgery went well and that you are mending. My muse has left me lately, too. I'm sure yours will return soon. Sending love and hugs to you, my friend.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine. Thanks for the gorgeous six.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
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You've been through such a lot lately, Ine. I'm not surprised if you're a bit out of touch with things. I'm sure it will take some time for everything to settle down.

Stay strong.

Hugs,

Av

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
Comment from Glasstruth
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Being away from home is strange. I remember way back in my twenties I was in for six weeks. The nurse told me you're going to miss all the attention you get from here. She was right. Your poem speaks from the heart. Hope your muse will hear it. :) Les

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2014


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2014
    Thanks for your kind review. Have a great and blessed Sunday, Ine.
reply by Glasstruth on 23-Mar-2014
    :))))