ice at the equator
5 7 5 personification15 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Could this be a touch of global warming? Al Gore would love this poem. Bill Clinton would promote it. Great contest piece. Best to you.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Could this be a touch of global warming? Al Gore would love this poem. Bill Clinton would promote it. Great contest piece. Best to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the review, it's Kili
Comment from Acquired Taste
Terrific 5-7-5. I love how she looks below at the plains.
Favorite line: ermine wrapped ice queen.
Artwork is terrific and really does showcase your poem.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Terrific 5-7-5. I love how she looks below at the plains.
Favorite line: ermine wrapped ice queen.
Artwork is terrific and really does showcase your poem.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the review. it's Kili
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is an interesting personification of a landscape covered with snow and ice, personified as an "ermine wrap ice queen." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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This is an interesting personification of a landscape covered with snow and ice, personified as an "ermine wrap ice queen." Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Thanks for the review, it's Kili.
Comment from barleygirl
I love your poem, with it's unique word choices that paint a lovely African scenario, but I cannot guess what the subject might be. The phrase "Ice at the Equator" is original & creative. Could this be Mount Kilimanjaro? Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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I love your poem, with it's unique word choices that paint a lovely African scenario, but I cannot guess what the subject might be. The phrase "Ice at the Equator" is original & creative. Could this be Mount Kilimanjaro? Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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yes,it's kili, thanks for the review barleygirl
Comment from kiwijenny
Where is there ice at the equator? Mount Kilimanjaro? Oh, I thought of ice in a glass as you cross the equator ...going through the Panama Canal and the captain dressing as king Neptune...that's where your poem took me. But I beat to a different drum :o)
God bless...I liked it
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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Where is there ice at the equator? Mount Kilimanjaro? Oh, I thought of ice in a glass as you cross the equator ...going through the Panama Canal and the captain dressing as king Neptune...that's where your poem took me. But I beat to a different drum :o)
God bless...I liked it
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2014
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yes, it's kili, thanks for the review