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Comment from MoIronE13
This is most exquisitely beautiful and haunting.
The passion is overwhelmingly strong and pulling.
A true Valentine Heart..
Thanks for sharing with me..
Mahina +++
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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This is most exquisitely beautiful and haunting.
The passion is overwhelmingly strong and pulling.
A true Valentine Heart..
Thanks for sharing with me..
Mahina +++
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much and also for the wonderful review and rating!!
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Deservedly SO...
Comment from GWinterwin
Love this poem and picture. Your words flow well and rhyme good as you tell of your want for someone. This sexy and sensuous poem makes one think of times of Eustace and delight.
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Love this poem and picture. Your words flow well and rhyme good as you tell of your want for someone. This sexy and sensuous poem makes one think of times of Eustace and delight.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from RGstar
Dreams seem to have a way of ending too soon just when we can escape reality for a while.
I really like the misty, dreamy rose effect which which adds to the eroticism of your write.
It was well presented and with warm imagery and a nice seductive theme.
Well done,
best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Dreams seem to have a way of ending too soon just when we can escape reality for a while.
I really like the misty, dreamy rose effect which which adds to the eroticism of your write.
It was well presented and with warm imagery and a nice seductive theme.
Well done,
best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from robina1978
Beautiful rose to complement this Valentine's poem. You build the love between you up to a climax. But when you wake up there is a tear on your cheek. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Beautiful rose to complement this Valentine's poem. You build the love between you up to a climax. But when you wake up there is a tear on your cheek. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much for the review and kind words and well wishes!!
Comment from Acquired Taste
Filled with emotion and very descriptive.
Dreams too often are so real and come from the pits of our psyche and soul.
Nice free verse - good luck with your entry.
AT=/
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Filled with emotion and very descriptive.
Dreams too often are so real and come from the pits of our psyche and soul.
Nice free verse - good luck with your entry.
AT=/
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you for you kind review!!
Comment from chasennov
'Desire.'
And as I suddenly awake from this tender dream a
tear stains my cheek, I reach for you in a whisper,
saying your name~
I love this poem. Just go and get 'em. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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'Desire.'
And as I suddenly awake from this tender dream a
tear stains my cheek, I reach for you in a whisper,
saying your name~
I love this poem. Just go and get 'em. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, glad you enjoyed it!!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Jackarrie
A beautiful Valentine poem, so romantic, with a passion and a deep desire in every line. There is no doubt about the strength of the love felt for your significant other.
Well done. good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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A beautiful Valentine poem, so romantic, with a passion and a deep desire in every line. There is no doubt about the strength of the love felt for your significant other.
Well done. good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 11-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind words!!
Comment from califdot
Your poem is nicely written. The Valentine's poem is sweet. The free verse form works well as does the lack of rhyme pattern. There is a cadence that can be heard when it is read out loud. The tone is sweet and tastefully sensual. Overall the poem is very nicely written. Good job!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Your poem is nicely written. The Valentine's poem is sweet. The free verse form works well as does the lack of rhyme pattern. There is a cadence that can be heard when it is read out loud. The tone is sweet and tastefully sensual. Overall the poem is very nicely written. Good job!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for your thought and kind review!!
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You are welcome
Comment from chicken scratch love
How beautifully sad. Such a powerful dream; ongoing or NOT! This is a deep thought process containing emotion that this person will NEVER know exists. Because, if the DID, it just wouldn't be as real as it is right now : /
Thanks for the share! Good luck!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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How beautifully sad. Such a powerful dream; ongoing or NOT! This is a deep thought process containing emotion that this person will NEVER know exists. Because, if the DID, it just wouldn't be as real as it is right now : /
Thanks for the share! Good luck!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2014
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Thank you very much and you are very welcome also...
Comment from kiwijenny
Sorry he doesn't know she exists......sorry for a tear.....and a whispering his name....well done...so descriptive and yet also sad
God bless,,,,.,,,,..........................
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Sorry he doesn't know she exists......sorry for a tear.....and a whispering his name....well done...so descriptive and yet also sad
God bless,,,,.,,,,..........................
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much...appreciate the thoughtful words :)