Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

astounded
by all nature
surrounded
by the stature
and the light
Venus of love
evening or morn, shines above

Awesome Whitney girl. I really like the rhyming it carries with it too.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks Pam, a great review. Mary

reply by Gungalo on 17-Jan-2014

Smile

Comment from maggieadams

Excellent

At first, I was taken by the interesting way the poem was set-up and the choice of the rhyming words. I did not know what a Whitney poem was, but through your expertly crafted Whitney, I see the beauty in its form. Thanks for sharing and teaching through your craft.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

thank you so much for the wonderful review, it is the first time for me to write a whitney

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

I love the combination of text color and font style. Your art work and poem compliment one another. Nice alliteration and the captures the ear. Good luck in contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great view and the wonderful comments, Mary

reply by DALLAS01 on 17-Jan-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from DionysusDeVille

Excellent

Wow, what an awesome picture to use and an equally beautiful poem that really grabs your attention. You stuck to the structure very well

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks so much for the wonderful review. Mary

Comment from Jacq77

Excellent

I always look up and admire Venus, and you have captured its shining beauty in your words. It never fails to impress and whether it is around dawn or just after sunset. Well done with this rhyming poem.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

I am so pleased you enjoyed the poem, Mary

Comment from Invisible Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written and indeed very beautiful I like the touch of rhyme which adds so much to the poem beautiful art choice

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review and the wonderful comments. Mary

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest
great picture
your words allow the reader to see and feel the love of Venus as it shines and astound us of its beauty
cheers Smoothiecool

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks for the well wishes and the great review. Mary

reply by Smoothiecool on 17-Jan-2014

cheers>>>>SC

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

I liked what you wrote very much

I loved the art work as well.

The last few words

"Venus of love
evening or morn, shines above"

Honey tree

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 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

thanks for the great review and nice comments. Mary

reply by honeytree on 17-Jan-2014

Thank you Mary and for your review as well.

Annie